Let me read and review your story!


#1

Hi all! I’ll be doing a detailed review of your story! I’ll try to be as constructive and honest as I can with the feedback, but hopefully not rude. I’ll base my review on your first 3 episodes, and it will consist of 3 parts:
1) Story Plot
2) Directing
3) Characters

To get a review,

  1. Please read at least 1 chapter of my story Heading South (http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5153612251660288)
  2. send me some screenshots through PM/Instagram DM/a reply to this thread. My Instagram handle is @jasminelilac.episode
  3. Don’t forget to tell me what you like/dislike from the chapters that you’ve read!

When you’re done, please comment in this thread with this form:
Story Title:
Story Style: (Classic/INK/Limelight)
Author Name:
Genre:
Published Episode:
Story Link:
Instagram Handle:

Look forward to reading and reviewing your amazing stories!

Thank you!


#2

I am currently reading your pilot. It’s been about 10 minutes and I’m still reading it so kudos to you for making a long first episode. I’ll DM you screenshots soon. Here is my info in the meantime.
Story Title: Illegal Alien
Story Style: Limelight
Author Name: Literally Dead
Genre: Fantasy
Published Episode: 4
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6005998233452544
Instagram Handle: mysoxlike2partyepisode


#3

I’ll also start reading your story so I can get the review out quickly! Do you want me to put it here, or send it to you through Instagram DM?


#4

Story Title: H&V: Our Story
Story Style: Ink
Author Name: Ki_Writes
Genre: Action
Published Episode: 3
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4786197070741504
Instagram Handle: Don’t have one
You can pm me the review. Thank you!


#5

IG DM please.


#6

I’ve sent the review to @mysoxlike2party’s Instagram DM. Will start @K_Artist2001 in a bit! :slight_smile:


#7

Okay, thank you so much!


#8

Story Name: The girl who wasn’t strong enough
Author: Meera
Genre: Romance (also Drama)
Style: INK
Published episodes: 7 (Ongoing)
Description: When you’ve finally broken, will you survive the fracture or will you break even more? A inherited trait that you don’t know you have, and everyone’s out to get you because of it.

Why I think it’s unique:
Everyone’s different, and that’s what makes the world unique. However some can’t understand that, which result to hate. You’re the shy girl, the kind girl, the girl with possible powers? Powers to do what? You have no idea what you’re capable of until you share what 350 million people worldwide have. Depression.

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/48385706733076481

Tell me what you think and if you have any suggestions or comments let me know in my fan mail. :slight_smile:

Private message me your review, I did the same!


#9

Title: Enagaged
Author: Navya Sallan
Genere: Comedy
Style: Ink

Description: what happens whe you suddenly found out that you are engaged to a hot stranger in America and you are forced to move to America woth him!!!

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5810322648203264

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#10

@Merose I’ve sent the review to your PM! :slight_smile:

Hi @Navya! Please read my first chapter first, send me the proof, and tell me what you like/dislike from the story. Thank you :slight_smile:


#11

Anyone else wants to get reviewed? I’ll try to help you improve your story as much as I can through my feedback and suggestions :slight_smile:


#12

Title: LOBITA
Author: EJ Dee
Genere: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Breezy has grown up surrounded by the Lobos, a motorcycle gang founded by her father. She was always put family and family business first… But will her newfound love life be a distraction? And will it last?

Let me know what you think
Link


#13

Hi @RudeInception! I’d love to read and review your story, but please read at least one chapter of my story first, send me the proof, then I’ll get to your story right away. Thanks! :slight_smile:


#14

Okay :ok_hand:t3:


#15

Here you go hun


#16

@RudeInception anything that you like/dislike from my story? I’ll read and review your story tonight after I’m done with work :wink:


#17

Hi! I would appreciate an honest review <3

Form: Ink
Username: ltxo
Author Name: Lara
Story Title: From Girly to Manly
Genre: Romance/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Ever since the new queen’s reign the kingdom has been divided. There is a barrier between men and women. What happens if you have to pretend to be a boy, but then start to fall for the guy you deceived? [CC]
Published: Yes, Episode 6 so far
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5238987157798912


#18

Hey, I’d appreciate if you could give a read/review on my story, 6 episodes out so far.
Title: SHANKED!
Author: feck.b
Category: action/adventure
Description: She runs in tears, bumping into a “school friend” stabbing someone. Forced to join in a British gang,What Will Haunt Her Now?
Instagram: feck.b (sneak peeks and edits will be posted once my followers are up).
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5563581969596416Story
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This story also uses East London slang.


#19

Name: Art of Desire
Author: Joqueena
Genre: Romance
Summary: A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them
Style: ink
Published: yes
Instagram: Joqueena_stories
Forum: Joqueena
Episodes: 3
Questions: Story too long?
Is the plot interesting enough?
Should I allow readers to generate name/ create avatar
Is the story set up good for the reader to understand
Additional notes: Hello people this is my first story on episode so if you have any questions comments concerns and most of all advice I’m all ears thank you
Link: Art of Desire


#20

I’ve messaged you the review! :slight_smile: