Let me read and review your story!

Hi Joqueena, I’d love to read and review your story but please read at least 1 chapter of my story first, send me the screenshots, and tell me what you like/dislike from the chapters that you’ve read. Thanks :slight_smile:

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Hi, Jasmine!

My name is Alex (just like your MC), and I just read the first episode of your story, please, find below the screenshots:

I hope you will like my story as well!

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af

LOVE
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Hi Alex! Is there anything in particular that you like/dislike from the story?

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Hi, @JasmineLilac!

I really like how you use animations in an unexpected way. Of course, there just aren’t animations for everything but you definitely find a great way round that! For example, the guy stretching and characters holding arms etc. I is always great to see solutions like that!

For me the chapter was a bit too long. I understand it was a pilot, but still I would have probably split it in half.

I hope that helps!

LOVE
:blue_heart::blue_heart::blue_heart:

I think I found an infinite loop on your story. I’ll send you a DM on Instagram!

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That happens to some readers, unfortunately. Is that chapter 3? Try quitting the app and reloading the story. That should solve the problem (hopefully)

Hi Jasmine!

I’d love a review of my story:

Title: Blue Lily
Author: Anyanka
Style: Limelight
Genre: Drama
Chapters: 4 (ongoing)
Description: Josephine is a young woman surrounded by people who love her. When tragedy strikes, she turns her life around, making choices she never would have. Will she find her way back?
Instagram: @anyanka.episode

Link:

I’ll DM you screenshots and my thoughts on your story as soon as I read it! Thank you :slight_smile:

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Hey @JasmineLilac I read the first chapter of your story overall it was good however at the beginning I was a little bored I felt like it took a little too long to get me interested. But overall the story was good and funny. I especially like the main character and brother fights they were cute and funny also the love story between the main character and her ex is adorable can’t wait for them to start liking each other again. Oh and the cover page looks amazing I really like the design

Here is a screenshot to proof that I read your story

I actually have 5 stories. You don’t have to read all of them, but any feedback on any of them would be great. I will list all of them on here.
I recommend tapping slowly on my stories because if you tap too fast it will mess up the movement/animation sometimes.

I am working on reading your story. I will comment on yours once I read a few chapters.

Note: I don’t have instagram

Story Title: No Longer An Average Teenager
Story Style: INK
Author Name:Brooke
Genre: Drama
Published Episode: 9
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4532937287794688

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Story Style: INK
Author Name:Brooke
Genre: Drama
Published Episode: 3
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5168354407743488

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Story Style: INK
Author Name:Brooke
Genre: Drama
Published Episode: 3
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6699955130204160

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Story Style: INK
Author Name:Brooke
Genre: Drama
Published Episode: 3
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4764973677674496

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Story Style: INK
Author Name:Brooke
Genre: Drama
Published Episode: 3
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4744947317211136

I have read the 1st 2 chapters of your story.


Here’s what I like/dislike.
You’re chapters were very long.(can be a good and a bad thing) some people like chapters that long, I personally would have made them a bit shorter.
From what I have read, you have a very intriguing plot, it is definitely something that will pull readers in, ( they would want to know more trying to figure out what the whole story was)
Despite what I just said, your story is kinda slow to start off. You could have made the story a little more interesting here at the beginning, or have given the readers a little more information at this point to help make them want to find out more.
Your directing and all of the technical/grammatical aspects of your story were pretty good!

I’ve sent you the review! :slight_smile:

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@Littlefeets and @joqueena thank you! I’m going to start reading your story now, but since my work is keeping me really busy I think I won’t be able to get the review done until the weekend. Hope that’s alright with you two :slight_smile:

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That’s perfectly fine with me!

yea of cousre

Thank you! :heart:

Bored and got nothing to do? Care to help a friend out? Read my story on the episode app it’s called

Title: Strictly Alive!
Author: RMBS
Genre: Romance
Summary: You were Born Rich, but with rules too. Will you be able to live your life? Or will you be bound by the rules.

  1. My fan mail is always open. Suggestions and comments are highly accepted.
  2. I can do read for read. Just say the title and author on my fanmail and I’ll make sure to read it!

Hey sorry to bother you, but have you ever done my review? I was just looking and noticed that I still hadn’t received a review.

Closing due to inactivity :slight_smile: