Let me read ur story

Hey there.
Can I read your story and give my opinion?


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I hope you read mine and share your opinion either in the fanmail or here

Author : hipsy_writes
Title : Falling For Him
Genre : Romance
Description : Max doesn’t believe in the Myth of deadly creatures until she crosses path with Kito. What mystery awaits her when she gets involved with him? NO CC/ 1LI / Art Scenes
Style : Limelight
No of Episode : 3 episodes have been published and more episodes are coming
Link to the story : Episode Writer Portal
Insta Acc : @hipsywrites

Hi, I’d love to know what you think of my story :blob_hearts:

i hope u read mine n share opinions :upside_down_face:
Here is my story <3
Name: Tempted By Him
Genre: Romance (Mafia story)
Style: Limelight
Description: After an unforgettable night of passion, Leane finds herself pregnant with the child of California’s most feared man. Will this child be the cure to his cold heart?


Hi there,

I would love to review your story.

Can you review mine?

Story name- Mystic Academy
Genre- Fantasy
Description- Mia knows nothing about herself while she’s surrounded by God gifted Fairies to stop the evil. Will she be able to know the truth and fulfill her duty?

Thank you so much!

Thank you for this, I hope you’re interested.

Title: Earthbound

Genre: Fantasy

Published Episodes: Two (Three is blocked since it’s under revamp rn)

Description: After being sent down to Earth to fulfill their duties, two conflicting beings, an angel and a demon, have to face the secrets left behind there. Never knowing what comes next…

Featured Content:

  • Almost full CC for MCs (No eye color change and for one mc only limited lip shape options)
  • Two MCs
  • MCs genders can be chosen
  • Choices matter
  • Point System
  • Advanced directing
  • Overlays
  • Art scenes (Edited & Drawn)
  • Sound & Music effects


(Cover made by @/caitlin.epi)

Link: Episode Writer Portal

My IG: @v.h_stories

Hello! Please read mine and let me know what you think on here or fanmail. This is my first story and it has three chapters out.

Author: Llamadrama
Title: Mystery of Cherry Street
Genre: Mystery
Description: Supermodels: Katie and her two best friends move into a house together, but strange things start happening. Will she uncover the mysteries of Cherry Street? And maybe find love? LL

  • No CC
  • No gem choices besides support the author at the end
  • Mystery/horror/drama/romance all in one!


The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Mystery of Cherry Street

Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!


Hey, thanks for doing this!!
Could you review mine?

Title: Identical Souls
Genre: Fantasy
Description: Headstrong twins enter a cruel, unjust world where their lives are constantly at risk because of their identity. Within this lies a twisted web of dishonesty, secrets and betrayal.

link: please DM me for the link.

Hi there,

First the cover of your story is amazing and the storyline is great,
However your story is so direct, the dialogue between the characters are so direct and straight to the point, you were too brief on the scenes, you need to let us the readers feel the characters emotions be it (humor, sarcasms etc.)
The characters are good looking NGL lol.
Definitely going to keep reading that is if you add more emotions to the characters and dialogue.

That’s my observation :two_hearts: :two_hearts:

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I will add emotions in the upcoming chapters

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Hey! If it’s alright and if you have the time, please check out my story “Takes Three To Spill The Tea” on the episode app!

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Super nice of you to offer! Here is the link, hope you enjoy!


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Sure! Here’s my link if you’re interested Episode Writer Portal

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