The only thing feel like its too much is with the text effect. I mean, you can do with them but not every line need that text effect. Maybe in some words you need to mark to be bold i guess thats okay, but not every line in one bubble. And maybe you can give the newer costumization template that’ll be more exciting! Other than that, i have nothing to say.
If you dont mind you can check my story and leave a feedback about it? Thank u so much!
ahahaha oh sure okiess. oh i use underline as a means to indicate and ‘highlight the major linking points in the story’…its like to link and foreshadow future events and tie the plots of the chapters. I plan to do a recap…and all those underline will be he ones in the recap hahah cause they are the most crucial ones.
Ok i spoil it: Point 1 by right they are going to a normal village with that objective in mind… but little they know theyll end up in Malapinchi…and indirectly fulfill the point 1 objective which they plan for the other village hahaha. Point 2… since the MC is a leader…lets see if her decisions will make a positive difference in the lives of others hahaha. Point 3 is interesting…something unique about the MC which im still in the process of developing… i sighhhh why didnt i choose to write some simple cliche where the plots are readily available hahaha. I have to wreck my brain hahah and do research… haisssssssss.
Yup! I’m Malay-Muslim from Singapore. Thats why most references and the story from there hahaahah.
I finally got to your story, sorry, it’s been a while haha
So here’s some feedback for you:
During the plot twists at the end of chapter 1 & 2, I was really confused, because I didn’t know who those characters were and their significance to the MC until the next chapter. Maybe you should make the MC talk about them more, or include them in the flashbacks or something, to make those characters known. That way, the plot twists are more exciting when the readers come across a known character that has meaning to them.
The grammar was pretty good; my only issue was that there were a lot of errors concerning verb tense. Just polish those up and you’ll be good to go
The directing was pretty basic. I didn’t really see any errors, and I loved the transition to the flashback! The use of effects was amazing
I would like to thank you for reading my story and give feedbacks. English is not my first language, but I will try my best to improve it. And as a mobile creator I will also try to do something better… Thank you once again…
Looks interesting! I would be willing to do a read for read with you!
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960
Your story is amazing! Haha it’s one of the few stories on Episode that make my heart literally pound in my chest. The story format is so amazing and unique, it makes it even eerier. Love it
Peace,
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Here are my two stories…
Title: Just A Mess… Author: Empress Vanessa Style: Ink Genre: Comedy/Romance/Drama CC: Will be in Episode 8 # of Episodes : 7 (On Going) About my story:
I got the idea of this story by reading so many great stories that I wanted to combine them all and do a parody! I hope you will take a chance to laugh and be happy reading my story! Description: Summer attends a new High School & has a few admires. Mr. Soprano fools round w/his personal assistant at work, but is that enough for Kendra? Or will she go back to her sugar daddy? PARODY Choices Matter! Intagram:@vanessa.on.episode & @justamess.on.episode
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Title: Living In The Moment Author: Empress Vanessa Style: Ink Genre: Drama/Romance CC: Yes # of Episodes: 5 (On Going) Description: When she decides to leave LOVE alone due to her failed relationships, she wants to become focused on SELF only. Moving into her new apartment, may have it’s challenges.
Choices Matter! Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4642676949254144 Instagram:@vanessa.on.episode Covers:
Your intro was hilarious lol! When I saw the alien I lost it My main criticism is the grammar. There’s a lot of punctuation and endmark errors, and a lot of sentences are phrased awkwardly. Just make sure to brush up on that It’s a great story, and I loved reading from a male perspective!
Other than that, i have nothing to say.
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My main criticism is the grammar. There’s a lot of punctuation and endmark errors, and a lot of sentences are phrased awkwardly. Just make sure to brush up on that