I mean what other girl in an Episode story doesn’t go extreme lengths to break the main couple up?
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I mean, yeah, of course. She goes off on that whole rant about how MC ruined everything because she “sees the way he looks” at MC. So I mean, she’s annoying and persistent though probably doesn’t have many different thoughts about Bentley than he has about MC. But Victoria, of course, gets progressively worse lol
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I’m so going to expect Victoria going Regina George here. This line is just funny though, because this is pretty much a summary of Bentley’s thoughts but voice out and from a mean girl.
Edit: Also she is definitely going to do the Vegas thing, she mentioned Chanel
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This is more of a general rant but I hate when rich people do this
Go buy some houses for homeless folx or something 
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- What’s with Episode and making everything a costume party?
- Out of context, Bentley says more harassing things than Preston ever does, but they are framed as ‘jokes’ which MC also figured out, but then again it kinda implies that you can say these sexual jokes which aren’t considered harassment but anything more aggressive isn’t.
- For someone who thought of an entire future, MC is pretty forgetful.
- Like ew, what the hell Layla?
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Yeah, I don’t think I’ll be checking this story out anytime soon - yikes. 
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Poppy keeps getting taller and taller.
When the LI teases the MC about how she probably wants him, usually while he’s in a towel… It’s often some form of “like what you see?” which I don’t think I’ve heard anyone in real life say in a non-creepy way. Anyway, it irks me.
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Just … why for those types of lines? It’s a little funny to me how Featured and trending stories in general would write scenes in a way so that MC and LI see each other after a shower and/or naked, and most of them are just unbelievably awkward.
It’s the thing with the MC in Perfect Little Housewife too, where she is like 5/8s the height of her friend and LI.
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I’m reading a bit of the OG. For some reason, Featured Bentley looks kinda different from the OG, and IDK why - it’s only his hairstyle
And there is also the part where you don’t CC MC until after Poppy gets the DUI, which I really don’t get since the scenes that happen before it you don’t really get an idea on her personality or character that warrants this.
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LMAO okay I appreciate the LI being so sweetly devoted to the MC but I snorted
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TBF, I’m sure Bentley isn’t meant to be written as a pervert, at least not entirely. It’s just inadequate writing that forgets he is acting beyond what Preston and Chad has done with MC at times. Or that he is supposed to be different from the two because he’s ‘joking’ or teasing about his feelings despite absolutely fallen head over heels for MC at this point.
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When I was CCing Bentley here I unintentionally used mostly ‘classic’ features like the manbun and generic nose shape. So it was such a shock to me that the guys together facially look similar too
IDK what’s the point of this plot point, here and in the original, but this is utterly creepy.
Also, is Harvey (left dude) looking the most buff? I wasn’t sure if this is falling under something stereotypical or not 
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It looks like some sort of sex cult. The man on the far left looks very ripped and I’m living for it.
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If we’re gonna get ultra ripped bodies at the end of the day, why not? Lol
It does! 
There are a lot of things Episode could benefit from. “More abs” probably wouldn’t have been on my list to be honest. 
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I feel like that would still be better than what’s actually happening.
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Is that “Chad” on the far right? I don’t remember him having chest hair, so I’m not sure if that’s the same body type or not. It’s a little hard to tell if it has the same torso shading because the waist of the undies is higher than the bathing suit.
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I LOVED the original version. All of Bri’s stories are awesome. I really don’t like the featured one. It’s too… Episode style.
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Yeah, Chad for some reason has the Wolf chest and pudgy stomach