omg i feel like such a terrible person, i’m currently writing a mafia story, does anyone have any advice for things to avoid to do when writing? or things that i should do when writing?
You and your family just moved from LA to Las Vegas. But you have a secret, you are the most feared Mafia gang in the country. Your family is apart of the Mexican Mafia and you and your sister are fighting to be heir of the Mafia. Since you and your sister are both twins and were born at the same time, your father wants to give you both a fair chance to prove yourselves worthy to be heir. Your father says whoever can take down the Italian Mafia, and kill their heir, will become the new leader of the Mexican Mafia.
Soon you meet Dex Young, a charming 18 year old that you and your sister are both head over heels for. But Dex has a secret, he’s the heir to the Italian Mafia - the person you must kill.
Will you and Dex be able to keep your secret from each other? Or will your true identities show, along with your true feelings for each other?
PLEASE give me hard criticism and things i could make better or change. thank uu !