Hey I would love to do a R4R with some people who want honest feedback about their stories! Not sugar coated, or I might hurt your feelings, A REAL HONEST R4R I mean how will we improve if we just say “Aww babez that was real sweet”, when we are actually thinking " OMG you published it and you can’t get there, their and they’re right?"
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Chapters: 3 and more coming
Description: You are a troubled teen, who decided to use detention as an experiment class. Now you and your “friends” have super powers? Water, Fire, Earth and Thunder - with Love interests, Mini games and CC
This is not a R4R for the weak hearted!
So if you want help and someone to actually tell you what they think, then send me your link
I’d love to do r4r with you. We can give each other some constructive criticism to improve our stories!
Title: Eat Your Heart Out
Author name: F/N
Description: Wishing for an angel to disentangle your life takes a strange turn when an unholy creature appears. Will the love of the enigmatic detective or the lust for a fierce vampire?
Episodes: 4 (Ongoing)
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5898407973683200
Additional notes: CC, Choices matter, LL.
If you want a proofreader I would be happy to help! I’ll send feedback by Saturday (so if you’re in U.S.A America then I mean Friday). @EmStar I don’t have a published story yet but I’d love to help you with yours.
First of all you’ve got 301 reads that’s impressive and I like the idea of your story I will give you my honest feed back because I believe it’s more helpful and also I am not perfect either which is why I am doing this
I don’t understand their friendship, like they are horrible to each other lol
I like your directing of this story and the overlays and your grammar is good … but I felt like the story was a bit slow for me, but that’s my opinion and you’ve got 260 people that have read it and think differently so I hope you don’t take it too personally