Let's do a critical R4R ,one where you can say what you really feel about the stories?

Yeah it’s strange how they sensor words like sxy when every story on Episodes has something to do with sx in it lol

Dunno maybe change it to lush or promiscuous

Like Dirty Promiscuous Money or something? I’m not sure if that is even how you spell it lol

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I would love to receive some honest feedback. :two_hearts:
Story: Throw the dice!
Genre: Fantasy
Style: LL
Author: Lola
Description: Two rich sisters move to a new house with their aunt. Everything seems normal until one of the sisters decides to visit some cursed underwater caves where she finds… two dice.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6418215259537408

Some of your character placement is off. Whenever the classroom background shows up the overlays glitch each time.

You have a lot grammatical errors.

Also, black peoples lips usually match their skin tones.



I would love to do r4r :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Story: Bad Luck
Author: Senada
Gerne: Romance/Comedy
Style: LL
Chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Description: You got the job at the hospital in LA , but then you find out that the doctor you will be working with is living in the same building as you.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5831634731597824


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Was that meant for me or the op?

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I would love to do r4r with you :blush:

That’s the problem when you use random for the characters lol

And thank you for reading I really appreciate your time and feedback!

How would I fix the glitch? I’ll work on refining the little bit’s, like props etc.

Thank you, my lovely

Oh yeah of course.

Here ya go!
Here is a little description:
Title: What If
Genre: Drama & Romance
Chapters: 3 for now
Link: https://episodeinteractive.com/r/s/6255646867652608
Instagram: Judiths_episode!

LOVE IT! :heart_eyes::heart_eyes:

Thank you! I really appreciate your grammar advices, my english Is nothing much, So I’m glad that I can fix this errors.
Btw would you read it even if you won’t have to? Like would you want to continue it or not? Also did the plot seem confusing to you?
Btw I didn’t exactly change the camera in that scene :smile: I just panned somewhere else And turned the characters. When you add points, you don’t have to use very complicated coding, I think that point system Is one of the most easy ways to make Story more interactive. I can screenshot you some of the tutorials I learnt from if you want to :+1:
Btw I’ll start reading yours in a few Hours And message you then!

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Hello, I would love to do some r4r with you and to hear your honest thoughts about my story.

Title : Life in Demby
Author : Megz_episode
Description : The new students arrive in the university of Demby to start their new life. What will happen when the mysterious Author try to draw them into his sick, twisted GAME?
Cover :

Episodes So far 13
Style INK
Genre : drama
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5842077707730944

Thank you :slight_smile:

I enjoyed yours as well. Natalia is cutely funny lol

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