I would love to receive some honest feedback.
Story: Throw the dice!
Description: Two rich sisters move to a new house with their aunt. Everything seems normal until one of the sisters decides to visit some cursed underwater caves where she finds… two dice.
I would love to do r4r
Story: Bad Luck
Chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Description: You got the job at the hospital in LA , but then you find out that the doctor you will be working with is living in the same building as you. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5831634731597824
Thank you! I really appreciate your grammar advices, my english Is nothing much, So I’m glad that I can fix this errors.
Btw would you read it even if you won’t have to? Like would you want to continue it or not? Also did the plot seem confusing to you?
Btw I didn’t exactly change the camera in that scene I just panned somewhere else And turned the characters. When you add points, you don’t have to use very complicated coding, I think that point system Is one of the most easy ways to make Story more interactive. I can screenshot you some of the tutorials I learnt from if you want to
Btw I’ll start reading yours in a few Hours And message you then!
Hello, I would love to do some r4r with you and to hear your honest thoughts about my story.
Title : Life in Demby Author : Megz_episode Description : The new students arrive in the university of Demby to start their new life. What will happen when the mysterious Author try to draw them into his sick, twisted GAME? Cover :