Hey, I have some feedback for the first couple of chapters. Really intriguing story!
First of all, I loved how the police officers came up with the theories about the murder! Your story shined the most during the crime investigation scenes for sure,
One directing critique I have is that you should place characters immediately before panning to another zone. I noticed that a lot of your characters pop up randomly on screen, and this helps you avoid that.
The grammar was pretty good! I didnāt see any errors, and the sentences were pretty well-structured.
Thank you so much! I hope you will continue reading
Yes I know I"m trying to work on that, but thank you for telling me
Thank you, Iād be surprised if I had any grammar errors
Iām working on your story right now so I will PM you once Iām done
Iād love to do a R4R
Hereās my story: Title: Marionette Author: Emily Genre: Drama Chapters: 5 so far Style: LL Description: Life as a teenager is fun right: partying and making the most of childhood? Well not for Isabelle. She didnāt get the teenage future she was hoping for. CC Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4773114578599936 Cover:
My story is called In Between by Carmela Marigold. It is about a tragic event that happened at a high school which causes drama, suspense, and a series of eerie events. At a glance it may seem like a cliche high school story, but it is a lot deeper and it goes beneath the surface.
Hey guys! Whatās up?
Itās my first time ever writing on Episode and I would appreciate for you guys to read it and give your opinion(criticisms are also welcomed) on my story!
Even though Iām a new author Iāve read many many stories on Episode so I had a really good idea how to work with my chapters!
I really like it and I think itās a very good story! I hope youāll enjoy it as much as I do!
Hereās my story;
Title: The Blood of Kane
Author: Lau
Genre: Fantasy but it has also mystery, romance, drama and humor in it.
Description: A mystery, full of the unknown and magical werewolf story! Discover the life of a strong she-wolf and her pack as she becomes the Most Wanted and Fearful wolf of all times! CC
NOTE: DEFINITELY NOT THE TYPICAL WOLF STORY where a weak abused wolf finds her mate.!!
Plot Summary: People have visons of their lives, but it never seems to go as planed. Things change, just like people. Itās impossible to be happy ALL of the timeā¦ You canāt run from the PAST. CC
Hereās my story, let me know if you want to do an R4R! Title: From Riches to Rags Author: ErinH Genre: Adventure Episodes: 10, more coming soon Story Description: Secrets, an arranged marriage, and a death sentence result in Elizabeth running from a kingdom fraught with war while a mysterious pirate repeatedly crosses her path. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6090470465077248
Title: Game Not Over Author: Edera Instagram: edera.episode Genre: Romance/Comedy Style: Limelight Episodes: 15. More episodes coming soon!
Description: Your friend Mette likes to play matchmaker. She wants to set you up with
Shams - āthe perfect boyfriendā. Sounds great, but someone else will fall in love with you! [LGBT option]
Hey, iām new here, and iām interested in r4r
Here is my story (also my first story)
Title: One Step Closer Author: Friksy Genre: Romace, Drama Story style: Limelight Description: Sheās as cold as ice. Brittney Davis is on the path of her dreams and no one can stop her. But could someone melt her heart? (CC) Episodes: 5 (more coming soon) Instagram: friksy.episode Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5297172828454912
Thanks for this thread, hereās my story! Instagram: ellec.writes Title: Dying Love Genre: Romance/Drama Brief Description: I loved you the moment I laid eyes on you. ā¦But as they say, all good things must come to an end. Art scenes inside. Cover:
Hi there!
So this is my first story I hope everyone have their time to read my story
Iām up for R4R! Title: Speechless Chapters: 4 Author: Episode.Cheesecake Instagram:@episode.cheesecake Description: There are a million different ways to say āI love youā. Noahās happens to be the one without words. After meeting Grace unexpectedly, Noahās life takes a turn to another direction. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4721651453329408 Cover:
Check out my story .
Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4601007371059200
Title: Left BreathLess
Author: Lizzie C
Chapters : 5
Description: Bria wants her fairytale man. What happens when the fairytale man is the mafia leader? Will Bria be happy?Will anxiety win?or the mafia takeover her soul?
Covers: made by @Koolgal.epi on instagram
I would like to promote my story! Iām im the middle of revamping but Iām not done doing that yet so all of the chapters are the originals. So yeah feel free to check it out!
Title: The Princess Of Fiore
Genre: romance
Chapters: 10 (more coming soon)
Author: inkkee
Summary: a story about an 18 year old princess whose life got turned upside down on the night of her 18th birthday. What exactly happened on that fateful night? And what will happen once she falls in love with a non royal boy?
Cover:
I hope everyone have their time to read my story 
