Lexy's story improvement thread 💞 (temporarily closed for catch up x )

Here to help with anything writing related! (constructive criticism on your story [first 2/3 chapters], description help, plot development, character development etc.)

Just pm me or reply to this topic x

Note: When I review your story please don’t be offended or become passive aggressive. The notes I give are just how I think you can improve and if you’re going to be rude about me trying to GENUINELY help, then do not ask. I will not respond to rude replies. Constructive criticism isn’t always pleasant to receive, because your thoughts and ideas are being critiqued, but rather than being butt hurt over someone actually trying to help, take their opinions into account.

Character development thread: Character foundation/development in four steps

Plot development thread: HOW TO: plot development in four steps

Queue: @Januva @bbygirlbrooks, @youngblackboy, @whosalla

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would you look at my story

i am almost done with chapter one but have taken a break from it. right now. and are working on chapter 2 instead http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6425193401417728

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Could you give me constructive criticism on my story?

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My story: Thriller: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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I would love to hear your opinion on my story :slight_smile:
Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique

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Sure just send me a link

@line123462 @JannahJackson @mystique_writer Will do. I’ll pm each of you privately with the feedback once I’m done xx

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Okay then…

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I would like some feedback :purple_heart:

Title: Kotton Kandie
Author: Pretty Eri
Genre: Drama
Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5532581127127040

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Will do :sparkling_heart:

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Title : My Freedom
Author : AZN
Style : INK
Genre : Romance
Description : He’s an actor and he’s successful. That doesn’t stop Grey from chasing a shy girl like Ophelia, while being engaged to her cousin.
Instagram : @azn.stories
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5828647379402752

Small cover :

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Would you like a story review?

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Yes please

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Title: College Days: Behind Closed Doors
Author: JessDeBest
Genre: Drama/Mystery
Style: INK
Story Description: College is all fun and games until you discover what’s behind closed doors. Students disappear one by one, and you’re going to get to the bottom of it.
Instagram: @iwrite.stories
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6459913677111296

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Hi, can I request a story review?

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Sure thing! Just send me your story details x

(I should note though that it may take a while - about a week give or take a few days - considering I still have five other requests and it’s Christmas and New years soon)

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Thanks so much! And that’s perfectly understandable!
Story Title: Guardian Angel
Story Author: Bbygirlrbrooks
Story Cover:


Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6713061872369664
Story Genre: Fantasy
Story Descripition: You’re a guardian angel assigned to your typical badboy. But as time goes on you realize that he’s not as bad as he seems. Will you be able to guard him & your heart?
Story Style: Ink

Can’t wait to hear back from you! There are only 7 chapters of this story so far!

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I’ll get on it as soon as possible :sparkling_heart:

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TITLE- THE ACT OF REVENGE
PLOT- After the Justice system failed Ella. Ella was imprisoned for a crime she didn’t commit. She escaped from jail and embraced a new identity. What awaits Ella in the game of revenge?
LINK-http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6610272544423936

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I’ll get on it soon!