Lia's review thread! CLSOED

I’m Lia and I’m willing to review the first episode of your episode story. Please keep in mind that I am brutally honest and I will speak my opinion and the truth.
Thanks, Lia xx


Story Title: Inner Circle

Author: zapcatini

Instagram: @zapcatini.episode

Genre: DRAMA, romance

Style: Limelight

Episodes: 4 right now, more coming soon!


The lives & lies of rich and famous college students aren’t as glamorous as they appear. Scandal, secrets, love and lust. Can you handle a world where rules don’t exist? CC LGBT



Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Aaliyah Ali
Genre: Drama & Mystery.
Episodes: 6 (more to come)
Summary: How will Alana, Lucas, Ryan, and Rachel survive their past and conquer their future…
If bad behavior follows them everywhere they go?
cc, and choices available!
Style: Limelight



Sounds good, I will read it tomorrow.

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Nice! I will try and read yours tomorrow !

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Title: Cliche Love
Genre: Comedy
Episodes: 3 (completed short)
Description: You’re the new girl in school who catches the eye of the bad boy. Not only is he a vampire but you’re secretly his bride. Get ready for everything cliche to happen in this story.

Sound brill! I am a sucker for fantasy so I might like this !

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Nothing really bad to say, It was perfect the humour, jokes and characters were spot on. I also like that there is diverse characters and a girl and girl relationship. Though I wish there was more choices such as relationship choices between Alana and Lucas.

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It’s really cliche and a comedy but I really like it lol

Thank you :black_heart:
Episode 1 one is more of an introduction.
Choices start in 2-6
When you say relationship… Do you mean like friendship or an actual relationship?
If you do mean relationship. Lucas isn’t a love interest for Alana.

Friendship then, though I did get the impression that they were a relationship because you said that he was her other half lol. Also I think at the beginning you could pointout that this is only an introduction.

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I thought it was pretty obvious since it’s episode 1 lol.
I call my girl best friend my other half.
Alana and Lucas is strictly friends.
I don’t want to spam your thread.
Again, thank you for the review :black_heart:

I like the idea and plotline of your story it is quite entertaining. But it gets boring just tapping on speech bubbles all the time could you add more advanced directing such as more zooms,pans and transitions as it will make the reader find the story less boring. I also think you could add some relatable aspects aswell such as more jokes.

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Your welcome :kissing_heart:

title: truth or dare
author: alexia capra
insta: epi.4lex
genre: drama
style: limelight
episodes: 9 (more coming soon)
description: Your life is loaded with popularity, lust, and danger. Is sacrificing your love life for your family’s benefit the right thing to do?

Hey there, thanks for this :slight_smile:

Since I already revamped my first epidoes, I would love to know what you think about it now. I am not a fan of introduction every character into every detail, so that’s the reason why there won’t be thaaaat much of the background in episode 1, but though I would like to get your opinion about the first impression of it. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Thank you in advance :slight_smile: <3

My details:
My Story:
Author: May Laugh
Title: Trouble Twins
Instagram: maylaugh_episode
Genre: Adventure
Episodes : 8 (going on) - I would love to get a review about 7 episodes.
Style: Ink
Always standing up for each other through thick and thin, that is what these twins are all about. But can they really master every chaos together?
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Hey dear, maybe you want to try this @TLdax913 :slight_smile:


I would love a review of my new story. Any and all feedback is welcome! :slight_smile:

Here is the info:

Title: Dark Essence
Description: When the darkness inside threatens to break free & destroy everything you hold dear… Will you seek comfort in the ones you love or allow your Dark Essence to take over? (Lim CC)
Episodes: 3
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight


Hey i am currently revamping my first story. SO could you maybe give it a review, when it is completed?

Story details

Author: Madhu
Story Title: Black hearts golden desires
Genre: fanatsy
Description: Nand, a sorcerer princess of solataria, has two beautiful loving sisters, her other two halves.But what happens when it becomes the vice versa and an old enemy from their past comes back for revenge? Will Nand overcome it? or will she fail??
Chapter: 6 (more coming up soon) (Currently being revamped, so i think it would be best, if you could just msg me before reviewing my story so I could say the status of my story.
Instagram: @episode.angelindisguise



Hi I would love a review !

Title Break Away
Genre Drama
Style Ink
Author Giana
Chapters 9 (10 is half way done!)
Description Twins Blythe and Braxton have only had each other. Until Holden and Collin came along. What happens when one twin wants to follow a path of love, desire, and destruction?