nobody can make you love yourself more than you can yourself⊠the point of the story
I love that!
Ohh⊠

I like the story which has logic and reasoning and also scenes which make sense in it⊠
When the LI is supposed to be âprotectiveâ but heâs so poorly written he just comes off as abusive. Like, ew. 
Ew
A few things I canât standâŠ
The need for there to always be three outfit choices⊠It takes too long unless you have a good template, and itâs not that important. I also donât need to pick an outfit for every scene, thatâs just pointless. Also on the outfit topic, the head to toe zoom 

NOOOOOOOO! just please let me get the hell out of there already. And never use the strike a pose animation after changing, it makes the character look annoying, and makes me wanna hammer them through the floor lol.
When dialogue or narration is written like: âWoW hE iS sO hOoOt!â Type things normally. The caps/uncaps/caps typing style is irritating, not funny, is overused and just doesnât suit professional writing.
Toe to head zooms in slow motion everytime we meet the love interest or whoever. They take so long and they just drag. I frantically tap to try to speed it up, even though it doesnât work. It just interrupts the flow.
I hate the fact that every outing with a friend when itâs girls, has to be a shopping trip. Itâs just so frustrating to me. Itâs old, itâs flat and itâs something I canât stand personally. Have something different. And if they must go shopping, donât just have no aim. Like they go and narrow it down to the dreaded three outfits, buys them all and then leaves.
The other common outing is to a club or bar where their goal is to get sloshed, act like dogs in heat, the best friend chases anything with a pulse and the MC gets hit on by a sleaze or drugged. Kind of predictable these days. Might be nice for the club scene to go differently. Acting mature rather than like newly legal teens. Have a fun night where they actually spend time together. If they do separate have a nice guy even if he isnât the love interest etc. Just make it original.
But I would like to see new outing ideas.
And heâs so controlling like heâs her dad or something 
Oh my gosh that bothers me so much! It just wastes time
YESSSS I REALLY HATE THAT
and sometimes they be adding whole conversations like dang let me pick my outfit quickly!!
in most of the stories, characters are so poorly developed and boring⊠the only thing the story is revolving around is Llâs abusiveness and mcâs uniqueness⊠itâs so old aaaaaghhhh
I love it when I get something more to think of a character than that, not only for two of them tho
I hate that when love interest doesnât have any own personality rather than only to fall in love with mc
. Itâs look like love interest doesnât use own brain 
Oh, I also canât stand girls verbally bashing men all the time.
If a man says something out of line to a Female character, the girls go off on one, but if a girl says something out of line to a guy, sheâs a âqueeeeeenâ.
Ernmmm⊠nope, sheâs just an ass.
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so true
Thatâs so true!
Itâs as though the author thinks that they are standing up for themself, when in reality they are just being as terrible as the other character
Itâs too common!
forreal! clearly if someone has anger issues like that, they need to work it out on their own. and if the Li is THAT controlling and jealous about people interacting with the mc, theyâre obviously gonna be overly controlling in the relationship. thatâs not something that I believe we as a community should glorify, especially with all the young readers on the app 
any kind of abuse/hate speech is wrong, no matter the gender like dafuq
Thatâs exactly right! These authors need to show thatâs not ok and these girls donât need to act as though itâs nothing
lol agreed! or even the Li and mc looking like siblings. incorporate a little diversity, folks