Thatās extremely unrealisticā¦ Iāve only heard of that happening like once
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After that itās like: āSO THEY CAN END UP TOGETHER TOO!ā
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nobody gonna talk about the level of underage kiddos having s*x almost every single night and once someone is a virgin cough mc cough they make a huge fuss about it and make fun of themā¦ sickening
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And the author makes a spinoff based on their relationship
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Ahh thatās so annoying and too common
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Eek
Exactly you almost never see badboy virginsā¦they always have to be fboys
And once the MC loses her innocence she gets all big and bad and stands up to bullies
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Exactly! Itās as though her confidence is gained by the recognition of someone else (if that makes sense)
Like once someone notices them and suddenly they are confidentā¦
They need to find confidence in themself by themself sometimes
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honestly, cliches can be annoying but I can tolerate them if theyāre well written and thought-out for the most part ! the one that I genuinely cannot stand is the internally misogynistic female protagonist who looks down on other girls for literally every reason in the book. it sorta goes along with the āiām not like the other girlsā troupe, like, hey! every other girl here dresses promiscuously and has a more casual definition of relationships than I, therefore I make passing judgement upon them internally and act like Iām worth more than them! sis, youāre not like the other girls, youāre worse. 
accordingly the bad boy who overly values the āiām not like the other girlsā girl for the sake of taking her virginity grinds my gears almost just as much.
complete side note, when the girl meets the boy and at first site gets all awkward and canāt even breathe because heās āso breathtakingā and just the-most-attractive-person-in-the-whole-world thing therefore she canāt stop staring is a little overplayed too & not what I personally feel would be realistic to a real life scenario? but then again, to each their own.
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Yup, which is exactly why I want to make a mate bond something that has to be chosen by both. Sure they can be attracted to each other, but itās not love at first sight
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Do you guys have any suggestions on how to make a story funny? Like what do you guys find funny and not funny?
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dude, I feel this so bad. itās so unrealistic to think any single person is the best at everything. plus, the ābad boyā stories where the dude has so many anger management issues that he tries to beat up or threaten anyone who even looks at the mc/slightly inconveniences her is so old. like, learn how to use communication to solve issues buddy. thatās 10x more attractive than assaulting everyone who crosses your path 
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Thank you so much! Sooooo true
Why would episode writers write this and show this as an attractive traitā¦
To me itās like foreshadowing to possible physical problems in a relationship
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Every single cliche storyās plot:
MC is a ānerdā who just so happens to have a childhood BFF whoās the (second) most popular girl in school. The MC has a crush on the bad boy who thinks sheās not like other girls because she stood up to him when he was being an ass. All the girls swoon at the sight of him and fall at his feet. The MC is somehow immune to his charm, that is, until she casually walks in on him shirtless. Then he aggressively takes off her glasses, calls her beautiful, and then leaves. Then the MC gets picked on by the mean girl (who just so happens to be dating the bad boy). It somehow motivates her to get an extreme makeover (which is just taking off her glasses and wasting gems on clothes). Then the LI suddenly wants to make babies with her (eek) and she gets preggo. The end.
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I like when authors add Vines in their story or funny events that happened irlā¦
For example, in the story āSo weāre adults nowā Jordyn said āPut your P**sy Lips on live and Iāll give you a thousand dollarsā was kinda funny to me because Lil Boosie said it 
(And I was personally on his live 
)
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personally, I like when I can relate to characters in a way (them being a whole a*s mood) but not when itās just to be quirkyā¦ honestly idk how to explain but I like seeing a genuinely funny dialog here and there (as long as it makes at least some common sense) even when the genre of the story isnāt comedy
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I love that!
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this is such a good point. like who tf cares what the love interests mom and dad looks like lol 
customization only really makes sense for the mc and the love interest, depending on whats best for your story.
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Haha thatās classic!
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Hey guys I read all of your conversations which interesting 
and also funny 
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