Limelight Story Review

I am doing Story review or Proofreading of Limelight stories for free …Anyone want me to do personalised review send me a PM or drop ur stories here :blush::blush:


Tysm for doing this :kissing_heart::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:


Thank you for this thread
Here is mine
Its all a mirage
An arranged marriage with your enemy Tyler Moore. Threat to the company you gave your life to help build, what will you focus on, disaster marriage or your legacy?


Hi! I would love a review, thanks!!


Thank you for doing this, Here’s my story :white_heart:

Title: The Apartment
Author: Sapphire (:
My Instagram: @ episodesapphire
Description: Mila, Emma and Benji living together in the city often leads to some chaotic situations. But things seem to be looking up for them at least.
Episodes: 3 (and will be continued)
Genre: Comedy
Story Cover:
Story Link:


Obviously Gimme some days as i don’t have unlimited passes which i hate🤦🏻‍♀️I will send u personalised report about the story at ur PM :blush:

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I love a review, if you still have time, I am no rush to get it.

This is my story

Title : Reveal: Scorn Heir.
Includes multiple love interest of both genders. Full CC of MC, limited of Love interest. Mini-games, point system
Directing: I will say I am a pretty Advance coder. and I made sure there are no mistakes
Genre: Fantasy
Grammar : good thanks to @MissHaze who have proof-read the story
Description: After a tragedy befalls the royal family, you’re forced to take the throne. Faced with challenges to your legitimacy and ghosts from the past, will you crumble under the pressure?

Link :


Yes …I surely have time :blush:

i would love for you to review my story & maybe even proofread, sorry


Hey everyone if u guys have instagram can u send me as when i do it i will be posting it in instagram :blush:
@line123462 @WinterMoon05 @Vendula @Butterfly_ep @Raitlyn @ciaraxoxoc


I actually don’t have Instagram. :pensive: Can you just PM me when you’re done? :relieved:

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Its ok :blush:

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yes my insta is the same as my profil name

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I would love it if you could review my story! :kissing_heart:

R&R: Crystal Abyss

Genre: Fantasy

Episodes: 3 (not complete)

Author: Jade135 (@e.p.i._jade)

Description: Tasked with a mission that could save the entire world, you’re forced to navigate the unknown alone. But the truth always comes out, and it’s not what you expected.

Extra Information:

2 LIs | Choices Matter | Limited CC | Advanced Directing



I would love a review!
Here’s my story
Title: Still Strong
Ig: lyra.episode
By: LyraE
Genera: romance
Style: limelight
Description: A successful athlete, and a CEO. A former quarterback; now her manager. Their worlds aren’t as different as they thought… Or will they both drown in their own darkness?



Thank you for doing this :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
TITLE: Our little secret

GENRE: Mystery/Drama

DESCRIPTION: What could be better than meeting five close friends at a student party? Such events are extremely rare. However, things don’t get so rosy when a dead girl is found in the house. Who is behind this and what is the little secret of each of them?

•Full CC

•One LI

•Sounds & Music

•Point System, Choices matter, Mini games

My ig: @epi.ksu


Thank you so much for this🥺
I’d love a review :hugs:

Title: Out of love

Author: Ria

Style: Limelight

Genre: Romance

Episodes: 1-4 (ongoing)

Description: When trying something different leads Amethyst into the arms of a stunning billionaire, is it true love…Or is it just lies and deceit?


Story link:

Instagram: ria.episode_


Sure, mine is complicatedperson6, thanks!!

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I want to know how my plot is, (I know the coding has quirks with mine lol I dont need to know that part) can you do that? Its limelight uwu

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Hi, thanks for this thread :blush:
I would love a review if you can💕
Author : Simi.a

Title : Apply pressure

Genre : Drama

Style : limelight

Instagram : simia.stories

Description : A strong-willed engineer. A billionaire CEO. They’re both fighting for what they can’t have. Can they beat the odds stacked against them? or will the pressure crush them both?


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