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Hello, and welcome to my story reviews. I am making story reviews because:
I want to help people make their stories better, I want to discover more unique stories and I don’t have nothing to do with my passes!

I am “rating” several categories:

Cover

  • Did cover describe story correctly?
  • How well is cover made?
  • Did colors fit cover?
  • Overall cover rate (1%-100%)?
    (Also will adding to this category description)

Plot

  • How cliche is the plot? (1-10)

Characters

  • Are characters relatable?
  • Do characters have personalities?
  • How realistic are characters?
  • Overall characters rating (1-100)

Directing

  • Were zooms/transitions at the right time?
  • How advanced was directing (1-10)?
  • Were there any spot directing problems?
    Extra:
  • Overall directing rating (1-100)

Sound

  • Were sound effects at the right time?
  • How was sound changing?
  • Did sound go with story?
  • Overall sound rating (1-100)

OVERALL STORY RATING

  1. Please give me all details about the story! It would be easier to use a link.
  2. Don’t be rude!
  3. If I don’t like your story aka give a bad rating don’t attack me!
  4. I have my own time so don’t insist feedback in first 3 minutes!
  5. I am only rating first three episodes

Ps: If you get more than 90% in overall story rating ,I will promote your story in my instagram author.elisabeth :blush:

Done

@Theebee2004 & @molly24’s “Twelve”
78/100

@nurella’s “Don’t go, I need your love”
12/100

@Nora_writes_episode’s “Loveless BFFs”
6/100
@sonder.author’s “𝕸𝖞 𝕹𝖊𝖎𝖌𝖍𝖇𝖔𝖗 𝖎𝖘 𝖆 𝕸𝖔𝖇𝖘𝖙𝖊𝖗.”
57/100

Doing right now

@Nikki_05’s “Impregnable Love”
@Streampaw’s “My Gamer Boys”
@arorajenkins’s “The Road Trip.”
@medusa.jett’s “For Dear Life”

Waiting list

@Nat.Alia’s " The Dragons Eight"
@Tsukino_94’s “Sealed with a kiss”
@LyraE’s “Still Strong”
@episode_katherinee’s “Call Of Duty”
@ParisAroha’s Unlock Me Out
@Makayla.Reed’s “Always Yours”
@Summi’s “Beauty Revenge”
@HazelJ’s “i i-Humanoids”

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I don’t have my story published yet, but maybe in 2 weeks. I would love if u could review my book! Will u still be doing this in 2 weeks?

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Ofc!
You can then dm me or just write here :revolving_hearts:

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Could you review me and my writing partners @molly247’s LL story please? We would massively appreciate it and if you can, please take you time x

Title : Twelve
Author : Molly & Thea
Genre : Comedy and Romance
Chapters : 3 and more coming soon…
Description : Ah yes, December, Christmas time, but also the perfect time to ask for forgiveness. Join Cody, a former playboy, on his journey to seek forgiveness from his former high school classmates.

Link: https://episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5600412467134464

Instagram: @kennedymolly97

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Sure thing!

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Oooo who make ur cover?

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Our lovely and talented friend @mdrawzz :pleading_face:

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Ty!

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It was my pleasure hehe :see_no_evil:

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no it’s ours lmaoo

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Hey Elisabeth! :blush: Thanks for the thread.I am a new author.
I’d be really happy if you’d take a look at my story.I’m really curious about your views on my story .This is my first story and your ideas are very important for me to improve myself.

I did the cover of the book. It’s not a professional book cover, but it’s compatible with the subject.
I’ve just published 3 episodes. 4.the episode is ready, but I can’t publish it because I need an artist.(for art scene).I also use sound in my story.

(I would love if you could review my book.)

Title : Don’t Go,I need your love
Author :nurella
Style :LL
Genre :Drama,Young-Adult Romance,Comedy
IG :nurunkitapdunyasi
Description :Defne begins a dangerous game by agreeing with her enemy to win over her ex-boyfriend Alex.İs it really going to be Alex that she wants to win at the end of this love-lust game?
Story Link : episodeinteractive.com/s/5249677170245632

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Hi!!! I would like to have my story reviewed! Here are all the details!

Title: Loveless BFFs
Genre: Drama/Comedy
Author: Nora
Type: Limelight
Description: Gabriella a not so normal girl who falls in love to easily and Nora a girl who doesn’t believe in love at all. They both seem to have perfect lives going to a fancy university on a scholarship. But Gabriella isn’t too bright when it comes to love and Nora would rather be alone. Charlotte, Audrey and Kam, Nora’s sisters like to participate in hilarious schemes to find out things they probably shouldn’t know. What happens when Gabriella meets Alex and Nora gets set up.
Story Link: //episodeinteractive.com/s/5880150882451456
Cover:

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Hello! Hope you’re doing fine! Thank you for doing this! :hugs:
If you wanna see or learn more about my story, you can check out my Instagram. :blush:
Here is my story.
:point_down:t2:

Title: 𝕸𝖞 𝕹𝖊𝖎𝖌𝖍𝖇𝖔𝖗 𝖎𝖘 𝖆 𝕸𝖔𝖇𝖘𝖙𝖊𝖗.
Author: Sonder. :woman_technologist:t2:
Instagram: @sonder.author
Genre: Drama, Romance
Style: Limelight
Story Description: 𝑀𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑅𝑒𝑑𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑛𝑒 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑁𝑌 𝑚𝑜𝑏𝑠𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑁𝑖𝑘𝑙𝑎𝑢𝑠 𝑅𝑒𝑒𝑐𝑒. 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑖𝑠 𝑎 𝑠𝑡𝑟𝑜𝑛𝑔 𝑤𝑜𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝑎 𝑔𝑜𝑜𝑑 𝑏𝑎𝑐𝑘𝑔𝑟𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑑 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑁𝑖𝑘𝑙𝑎𝑢𝑠 𝑖𝑠 𝑎 𝘩𝑎𝑟𝑑 𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑡𝑜 𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑑. 𝑊𝘩𝑒𝑛 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑟𝑎𝑛 𝑎𝑤𝑎𝑦 𝑓𝑟𝑜𝑚 𝘩𝑒𝑟 𝑂𝑊𝑁 𝑒𝑛𝑔𝑎𝑔𝑒𝑚𝑒𝑛𝑡 𝑝𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑦 𝑡𝘩𝑒𝑦 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑎𝑙𝑙𝑦 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡. 𝐴𝑛𝑑 𝑡𝘩𝑒 𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑙𝑜𝑠𝑒𝑠 𝘩𝑖𝑚𝑠𝑒𝑙𝑓 𝑖𝑛 𝘩𝑒𝑟 𝑠𝑐𝑒𝑛𝑡. (𝐿𝐿) 𝐶𝘩𝑜𝑖𝑐𝑒𝑠 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 𝑚𝑎𝑡𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑡𝘩𝑒𝑟𝑒 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 𝑜𝑛𝑙𝑦 𝑜𝑛𝑒 𝑙𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑖𝑛𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑡. (𝐼 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑑 𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑠 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝑚𝑢𝑙𝑡𝑖𝑝𝑙𝑒 𝑙𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑖𝑛𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑡𝑠 𝑢𝑛𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑙𝑖𝑠𝑡𝑖𝑐.)

𝖳𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗂𝗌 𝗇𝗈𝗍 𝖺 𝗎𝗌𝗎𝖺𝗅 𝗆𝗈𝖻𝗌𝗍𝖾𝗋 / 𝗆𝖺𝖿𝗂𝖺 / 𝗀𝖺𝗇𝗀𝗌𝗍𝖾𝗋 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒. 𝖳𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗂𝗌 𝗆𝗈𝗋𝖾 𝗅𝗂𝗄𝖾 𝖺 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝖺𝖻𝗈𝗎𝗍 𝗁𝗈𝗐 𝖼𝖺𝗇 𝗍𝗐𝗈 𝗌𝗍𝗋𝗈𝗇𝗀 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗋𝖺𝖼𝗍𝖾𝗋𝗌 𝖼𝖺𝗇 𝖿𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗂𝗇 𝗅𝗈𝗏𝖾 𝖾𝖺𝖼𝗁 𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗁𝗈𝗐 𝗐𝗈𝗋𝗄𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗋𝖾𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗉.

𝗖𝗵𝗼𝗶𝗰𝗲𝘀 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗯𝗲 𝗺𝗮𝘁𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗶𝘀 𝗮 𝗽𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁 𝘀𝘆𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗺 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗰𝗵 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝗮𝘁𝗵 𝘆𝗼𝘂’𝗹𝗹 𝘄𝗮𝗹𝗸.

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728753642864640

Stay Safe :blob_hearts:

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I would love to know your opinion abt my story.


Title: Impregnable Love
Description: Olive and Roger are friends since childhood and both belongs to Mafia Family. What will happen when circumstances separate them? Will they ever cross paths again?
CC, LL
Genre: Romance
Author Name: Nikki
Ig id: nikki_episode05
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6211636782366720

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Hi! Here’s my story. Let me know what you think!

Title: My Gamer Boys

Genre: Romance

Author: @Streampaw

Description: You love videogames… but you have no friends. The solution? Make friends with two HOT gamer boys. Friendship is all you want, right?
CC, Art Scenes, Minigames, Choices Matter, Points System.

Chapters out: 6. I will update every 1-2 weeks!

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6550056843018240

Cover:

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Hey! I am Bookmarking this.
Will back later

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Thank You for the Thread :blush: :blush: .
COMPLETED STORY
You can always see the promos on my Instagram to see if You’d like it.
If anyone wants to check it out:-

TITLE : The Road Trip.
GENRE : Rom/Com.
INSTA ACCOUNT : @arora.episode
EPISODES : 22 Chapters.
STYLE : LL
FULL CC for all main characters.
DESCRIPTION : What happens when a series of Bizarre events force you into a Road Trip with your Siblings? Does everything come together or fall apart entirely?
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5875664463527936


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Hey! Thanks for this thread! Sounds like the kind of review I’m looking for. Here is my story information!


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saves for my new stories

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Thanks so much for doing this!! I would love a review for my story!

Title The Dragons Eight
Author Nat.Alia (@nat.alia.writes on instagram)
Genre Fantasy
Episodes 3
Style LL
Description A civilization overrun with darkness. A dragon heir, powerless and alone. The fate of the Winged Empire lies in the hands of eight misfits…

… What can go wrong?

Cover

Link