Look I improved I think


#1

This is my 3rd edit for my story, I think I improved? What do you think ?


#2

It looks stunning!

Man, he’s really proud of his nipple :laughing:


#3

Haha thanks


#4

This is amazing, great job. :blue_heart:


#5

Thanks :heartpulse::heartpulse:


#6

It looks great!!