Yeah, sure.
The story is so good!!
really :>
Yeah. Itās really good. I like how you test peopleās memory at the bar scene. And I like that you made me want to read more to find out who those people are.
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aww, hope you support my story :> thanks you so much
And what about the grammar?
There are some mistakes but not a lot.
oh, thanks you T.T cause i really bad at english, LOL.
Everyone gets better with time
Am I too late? Iām Vietnamese, too so maybe I can help???
omg, Iām vietnamese tooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Iāll pm you.