Hi @Forever1201 ! Wow, that was really sad to see her in such a terrible situation that many people have to deal with.
*I love their outfit choices! They’re really cute! Even the MC looks pretty!
- Universal feelings, many people get dealt with bullying and it’s common to see people cry during facing this situation. I’m really happy to see that you included that. But, those bullies making fun of her because she is crying? Smh, put yourself in her shoes, bullies. Would you like a person to make fun of you because of your crying?
*This is like watching a real life situation, it’s so sad. ;(
*Thank you for introducing the characters, really thoughtful of you!
*Like you said before, several grammar mistakes and punctuation mistakes, but no worries! You’re new and “growing!”
*2-3 directing issues, for example when the Dad was walking towards the Mom and she he looked like he was sliding since he was the animation “rear.” You could use walk_rear and that will fix the problem.
Overall, not many negatives. You are fantastic at this. Keep up the good work! But, I have one more thing to say…
Message to bullies; Who do you think you are? Just because you have the “most beautiful clothing” or you’re the “best” at Fortnite, let’s not talk about your “followers on Instagram” Not to mention that you think that you own the world with all the “money” that you have. Well, listen here. Bullying someone causes lots of consequences, you could even go to jail for harassment. You could even be the cause of the number one, leading death “Suicide.” (If you are feeling suicidal, please call the helpline.) So, you wanna be popular by bullying people? It’s not nice and after all, you just want attention. You are so desperate. Put yourself in a victim’s point of view and they were getting bullied, would you like that? No. Bullying causes depression and anxiety, does it feel good to have that? Heck nah. THINK BEFORE YOU SPEAKKKK!!! It’s that simple, is it kind? Is it necessary ? Is it truthful? Think to yourself that. People change themselves to at least fit in, don’t do that. You’re beautiful, just the way you are. If people don’t appreciate your looks and make fun of you, AHAHAHA. Looks like Karma is getting you back. Don’t ever use physical situations, you don’t wanna get hurt and it makes the situation worse. Tell someone, it doesn’t mean you are a “snitch.” But, please. If you are in the situation, talk to someone and don’t keep it to yourself. You are going to get “bottled up and explode.” If you are the bully, let me say that you might become someone’s reason they died.
I apologize for the long review, but I just wanted to say that. If Episode ever did a bullying situation category, you should be in it.