Thanks you soooo much. Thanks for the feedback. You say. It’s a bit weird seeing the MC talk to herself without using the thought bubble, do you know how to do the thought bubble Do you mean that I’m using the narrator instead. Or do you mean something else .
I’m looking for someone to go over the grammar and stuff… because that is my weakspot.
And that girls should never change there self is one of the lessons in this story. Because it will come back. In episode 7 you see a scene between jackson en cassie that will show that more.
But it’s something alot of girls struggle with. Thats one of the reasons i put it in