Looking for a Proof Reader? :)

Thanks you soooo much. Thanks for the feedback. You say. It’s a bit weird seeing the MC talk to herself without using the thought bubble, do you know how to do the thought bubble Do you mean that I’m using the narrator instead. Or do you mean something else .
I’m looking for someone to go over the grammar and stuff… because that is my weakspot.

And that girls should never change there self is one of the lessons in this story. Because it will come back. In episode 7 you see a scene between jackson en cassie that will show that more.
But it’s something alot of girls struggle with. Thats one of the reasons i put it in :kissing_heart:

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Thank u so much for the review I will check the errors and fix it and I’m glad that u like it. I hope other people likes it too. And I’d there is a bullying category I would help :blush:

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Also I have a question where does it show the dad is sliding?

Like, when the character is speaking or thinking, it doesn’t show a thought bubble and it looks like she is talking to herself. Which is fine! But, if you want her to be thinking and showing the thought bubble, this is how you do it.

CHARACTER (animation)
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As I said to Forever, your story is amazing to be in a category of bullying, if Episode ever decides to do that. You are awesome at writing, Libra. I will try to continue to read it if I remember. I’ll add it to my favorites. :slight_smile:

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Like, it’s around the part when you are introducing the family. How do you say it? It’s like the dad is walking sideways or sliding since he was facing backwards? Or, the animation rear. If you want, you could make him walk_rear and then he faces left. I could show you how.

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Moved to Share Feedback since this is primarily for reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to ask me if there are any questions. :wink:

Oh right, I knew that this was in the wrong category! Sorry Sydney!

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Thank you again :pray:t2: .

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No problem! Have a terrific day! :slight_smile:

Hey there! I recently published my story and saw this thread and I’d love some feedback on it! :slight_smile:
Cover of the Story: Fill_Me_With_Poison_jM_posterThumb_fkSi5M0m1y

Name of the Story: Prophet’s Illusion.

Story Info: The Shadow Age has fallen but Silhouettes still lurk the night. Will the Age Of Shadows be once more after a Prophecy is engraved that determines the future of the human race?

Social Media (If you wish to add it.): @epi.jayda

Chapters you currently have: 4 (Next chapter final)

Style(Ink,Limelight,Classic): INk

Author of the story: Jayda Bish

Side Note: Read as many as you want, I’m really just looking for feedback :slight_smile:

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Title: Teacher or Queen,
Author: Mystique
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?
Instagram: @mystique_episode
Chapters: 7 (of course I would be. happy if you could read all of them)
Style: Limelight
Cover:

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Hi @Jahstoriess ! I’ll be happy to read your story and I’ll give you a review, very soon! :slight_smile:

Ooh, I love the cover! I’ll make sure to read it! :))

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Cover of the Story:

Name of the Story: Search for love

Story Info: Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation! Can you find the love you are looking for trying to escape?

Social Media (If you wish to add it.):
Instagram: @sigma.writes

Chapters you currently have: 14 ( more coming soon)

Style(Ink,Limelight,Classic): Ink

Author of the story: S.writes

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Adding to my list! :slight_smile:

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Hi! I’d be more than happy if you’ll be able to review my story. Thanks!

Cover of the Story:
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Name of the Story: Fallen Angel

Story Info: Mal’s world turns upside down on her wedding day. She changes her identity and is forced to confront the future, but also the dark secrets of the past. Will she get out alive?

Social Media (If you wish to add it.): IG: @episode.adyelly

Chapters you currently have: 6 (more coming soon)

Style(Ink,Limelight,Classic): INK

Author of the story: AdyElly

Link to my story:

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Okay! Great :slight_smile:

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Another one in my list! I’ll read it soon! :slight_smile:

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@Jahstoriess
Wow, this story is well directed and beautifully well-planned!

Positives. :arrow_down:

  • This story is amazing, such diversity! Goallllllssssssssssss.
  • The overlays are so amazing and jaw-dropping!
  • Right into the action, that’s awesome!
  • Thank you for the customization! :slight_smile:
  • I love the relationship between Lexi and Dwight, let me start my ship names for them. :laughing:
  • The cover and intro are beautifully well done!
  • THE LIST GOES ON, THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!
  • I like how you are doing something way different than other stories, well done!
  • Grammar, spelling, and punctuation is perfect and there is no errors!

Negatives. :arrow_down:

  • None!

This story is amazing, I already added to my favorites, I’m so ready to read the next chapters! It’s so good and interesting! This is obviously a…

5/5.

You are a wonderful person for doing this!
Cover:
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Title: Opposite in Harmony
Description: Aimie ran away from home and met the lord of all demons on Earth. And that 's when she has to ask herself all these questions: Are all demons bad? Are all angels good? Can you judge a book by its cover? Is she going to fall for him? Is he going to fall for her knowing that she’s the princess of all angels?
Chapters: Currently have 10 chapters.
Style: Limelight
Author: Pheebnomenal
Link:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5322669636845568

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