Looking for an HONEST review!

I just published my story Blurred Lines and am looking for some honest feedback if anyone would review it for me :slight_smile:

Author: Ellie
Description: After an intense break up, Quinn enters the world of no strings attached dating. What happens when it turns out there are strings after all, and she’s completely tangled in them?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4833334534668288

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Read the first chapter and so far it’s very interesting. Great job! There are some minor issues with grammar but nothing very serious :grin:

Thank you!
Oh gosh, seriously? I thought I got everything haha I’ll proof again!

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It’s ok your eyes are probably tired from all the screen time

And of course!

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