Hi guys. I just finished episode 2 of my story “The Perfect Flaw” and I hope to find a beta reader(-s) to look over the story and help me with grammar
Story Description: Faye hopes going to college she’ll leave her past and deep deadly secret behind, but turns out It’ll be a disaster. For someone knowing her flaw is an advantage.
Hi, sorry for being nosy but I just wanted to say I hope you publish this soon so I can add it to my favorites and come back to it to continue reading it😅 I love it so far lol Faye is too adorable!
Hey there
Would you like to read first two episodes of my story (not the 3rd, I’m working on it) and tell me your opinion about it?
I need a little help with grammar and other details
Thank u in advance!
Hey, I’ve started ch.1 just now and the DAD seems like he’s floating when he walks towars FAYE. Btw, the tattoo on the thigh is the perfect flaw itself eheh :D.
FAYE: It’s okay, really rather than FAYE: It’s really okay <-maybe???
Also there was droolling instead of drooling with just 1 L.
Oh and when entering the dorm room, the box disappears.
When saying an ordinal number, always but the before said number, example the first party, the second time.
Aaaand I like the story