Hello! 
. I’m looking for some honest feedback on my story. It’s the first story I’ve ever published and I need some opinions!
If anyone could give me some feedback I would really appreciate it 
My Instagram: @episodearietes
Here’s the details
Title: Translate my Heart
Description: After running away from your ex-husband you find yourself moving to a new country with the man you truly love & your best friends. But can you really run from the past? CC
Thank you!
aloha!
i’d be totally happy to help, i am a harsh critic tho, but i’m sure it’ll be coolio!
i also have my own story if you wanna check it out, i’d like feedback as well! 
(you aren’t obligated to, ill still check ur story out!
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Their love ran deep, Forever and a Day they’d say. Who knew it was only temporary, certainly not Deja and Foster.
Title: Forever and a Day
Author: Breanna G.
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance/drama
Status: 3 episodes (more coming soon)
Choices Do affect the story!
Thank you! I’ll check your story out as well 
I don’t mind if you’re a harsh critic, it actually helps me a bit more. As Lizzo said “Truth hurts” lmao
I appreciate it!
i’ve actually just finished the first chapter.
i must say, it’s AMAZING !
the directing is awesome and i love how you actually made choices matter!
i hate it when people have choices that don’t even make the story go the way the viewer wants it to.
i think the storyline is amazing, sure there’s a few stories with arranged marriages but most of those have the Mc fall in love with their husband, if you ask me that’s bOrInG!
i honestly have nothing bad to say, and it’s currently added to my favorites! can’t wait to see what happens next!!
Wow! Thank you so much
I agree most of the stories that contain arranged marriages do bore me lol!
Sorry for the late reply 
. I read your story and WOW the 1st chapter is really good, and I love the comedic element of the story!
r4r?
Sure!
my story
LINK:
I loved your zooms and transitions
I think it’s really cool to have a male mc. You rarely can find stories with a male mc!
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