aloha!
i’d be totally happy to help, i am a harsh critic tho, but i’m sure it’ll be coolio!
i also have my own story if you wanna check it out, i’d like feedback as well! 
(you aren’t obligated to, ill still check ur story out!
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Description
Their love ran deep, Forever and a Day they’d say. Who knew it was only temporary, certainly not Deja and Foster.
Story info
Title: Forever and a Day
Author: Breanna G.
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance/drama
Status: 3 episodes (more coming soon)
Choices Do affect the story!