Looking for Critiques on my Story

i’ve actually just finished the first chapter.

i must say, it’s AMAZING !
the directing is awesome and i love how you actually made choices matter!

i hate it when people have choices that don’t even make the story go the way the viewer wants it to.

i think the storyline is amazing, sure there’s a few stories with arranged marriages but most of those have the Mc fall in love with their husband, if you ask me that’s bOrInG!

i honestly have nothing bad to say, and it’s currently added to my favorites! can’t wait to see what happens next!!

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