Looking for feed back on our new story?

Hello, My mane is Nikki and my sister’s name is Luna.
We published our new story Take A Leap. We are looking for episode readers who would not mine reading our first 3 episodes and giving us feed back.
The only we require is that if it is criticism, that it is constructive criticism.

Story: Take A Leap
Episodes: 3 and on going
Genre: Adventure, drama, romance
Style LL
Story Description: Talulah, a bubbly, feisty, and curvy teen who dances, is offered a once in a lifetime opportunity! Will Talulah stay in her comfort zone or take a leap of faith?
Choices Matter
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4969133315915776

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seems interesting, i’d love to :slight_smile:

Hi, feel free to go to my review shop if you still want feedback.