Looking for feedback on my first story! Plz help me

Hi! I just published my first story, and I want to know if it’s any good…

Title: Take a Bite
Autor: J. M. L
Plot: Stephanie gets kidnapped by vampires, and it seems like the cocky vampire Theo won’t release her at all. Theo wants her as his toy, but Stephanie is determined to leave.
Genre: Drama
IG: jml_stories

If you check out my story, please leave comments down below (good or bad). I really want it to be a good story. I’m also down for R4R’s.