Looking for feedback on my story

It’s my first time writing anything on Episode and otherwise. I look forward to all the comments on how to improve my story. Thank you all so much!!! And shout out to all the writer’s on there it’s truly an art and lots of hard work. Thank you all for inspiring me to follow your foot steps. :heart_eyes::kissing_heart::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Looking for honest feedback on my story this is my first story on episode and would appreciate any and all feedback on my story thank you in advance for taking the time out. Also shout out to all the writer’s on Episode it truly is an art and hardworking to produce a great story on there so thank you for inspiring me to write my own. :heart_eyes::kissing_heart::smiling_face_with_three_hearts: