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Title: Niklaus Grand children
Author: Jazmend esparza
Description: Meet Niklaus grandchildren all 7 of them. turns out hope was the first born after all. Or was she?
Style: INK
Episodes Released: 10 (ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6153081077366784


@razmend23 I would love to give you feedback on your story. Would you mind giving mine a read as well?

Here is my story info!

Title: H & V: Team Velocity
Author: Tahirah G.
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Action/Comedy/Fantasy/Sci-fi
Summary: Ironically all of her life Justine Powers was POWERLESS until she discovers dynamic abilities that she never knew she had. Can Team Velocity count on her now to help save mankind?
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5151277251690496

I love it so far. I didn’t see anything wrong with it. keep wring
. btw how did you make the words blink like that

Closing due to inactivity :slight_smile: