I’m looking for some feedback/reviews on my first story. I think the first chapter is a bit slow and boring so if people also think that I want to go back through and change it but chapter 2 and 3 are where I started to feel more comfortable with my writing and directing. I am currently still writing chapter 3.
I would just love some feedback regarding the directing, the storyline, the character development, and how long each chapter lasted for you.
If you do take the time to read through, Thank you so much and it is much appreciated