Hi, English is not my native language, so I would really appreciate if somebody would help me with the grammar check of my story.
It is for the Clue contest. And I already finished 1 chapter.
I am OK with you suggesting new better wording if you see some.
Also, any kind of feedback itself to the story will be appreciated.
I know that working on something often means you have to like it. So here is the story description:
Story title: Secret of the necklace (contest Clue!)
Author: Farah DeSantis
Marbel, an ordinary shy nerdy student finds in the library book in which was hidden old looking heart shaper necklace. Because the book is dedicated to somebody with the same name as she (or was the book left for her intentionally?) she decided to take the book and find out the mystery behind the necklace.
Which turns her boring life upside down.
The same day mystery stranger appears in her school. Despite the fact he is the worst bad boy of all times he seems to be interested in shy Marbel. But what if he is actually somehow connected to the mystery of the necklace and his intention with Marbel is anything but good?
The book itself seemed at first to be a harmless romance fantasy about fallen angels magic and saving the world…but what if it is not fantasy at all? Marbel has to find out the truth and her role in this mystery before it is too late…for everybody.
Cover: - I have one but don’t know why I am not able to upload it now.
Let me know if you are interested and I send you the link