Looking for honest and helpful opinions on the first episode of my story

Just like the title says. I’m looking for that and looking to improve somethings. Please let me know if you can help.

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I can review your story if you want :slight_smile:

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I can too

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Hey I can review it as well.

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Hey there! I would love to review your story. Send me a message! x

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I can review your story if u like!

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welcome to community

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