Hi, again!
I’m done 
I’d like to say that your story is really cute, full of tenderness, the narration is quite smooth, and direction is very good 
I like all you characters, but I’d like to know more about their thoughts (you know, not only about each other, but about the world around them) and their «inner world», but there are only 4 episodes, so I’m looking forward to see it in the next episodes with lots of action and drama:slight_smile:
The only thing I’d like to point out is Logan’s behavior in chapter 4, why is crying? I think it’s not… not in a man’s manner?
But it’s only my subjective opinion 
And I understand that It can be just a part of his characteristic
Thank you for this beautiful story! 
BTW your sister is very talented too - wonderful art!
