Looking for some constructive criticism on my story

Hi guys! I just published a story called The Di Salvo Family and I’d be so grateful if people could give it a shot and give me any constructive criticism as I’m new to this and I’m willing to learn!

Description of the story:
Angel Di Salvo wants nothing more than to be a rock star, but the producer who is interested in her band secretly has a history with her family and has other things planned for her.

Genre: Drama
Author: Jessica
Front Cover:

Thank you! :grin:

(As of writing this, my story doesn’t have a cover photo as I didn’t realize it wasn’t approved yet! :joy:)

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