Looking for some feedback on my story! R4R?

I just came out with my story called Stardust to Infinity. It’s a romance/drama/comedy.
I have a difficult time seeing the glitches, because it will say things are fine on my phone, then switch on my laptop, visa-versa.
If someone would be interested in giving me a proof-read, I’ll be very open to read your story as well.
Thank you in advance. :slight_smile:

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I can start reading now. Do you have an idea when you will be able to start reading mine?

I’m avalible now as well :slight_smile:

Okay awesome! Here is the link to my story.


I am pretty sure you saw my post on how I am doing R4R so I won’t say much in this post. Feel free to show screen shots and I will do the same for you.

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I just finished reading chapter one and I gotta say I am quite impressed. The directing is like SUPER CLEAN. Sound effects are on point including the music. Getting on to chapter two.


And sorry for the lack of screen shots of chapter one thought I was going to be a bit longer. :sweat_smile:

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My story: Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller
Story style: Read and See :slight_smile:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5
Instagram: @jannahjackson
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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I’m actually dead​:joy::joy::joy:

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:joy::joy: I’m so happy that you did this omfg

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I just finished reading chapter 2 and here are some of my feedback

In this one there was a point in time the speech bubble remain in the same place for a couple of lines

In this one I would just make the character proportionate to the background. This applies to other scenes as well.

Another thing I would point out as people are entering and exiting the scene there were times the would pop up or you can see a little bit of them on the side of the screen before they enter.

Lastly thing I would say towards the end of the chapter Stark was entering the scene at the wrong layer and it looked sorta weird and it happened to some other characters as well (White apartment building?)

OTHER THAN THAT everything is great you sense of humor is on point and I like the characters personalities. You don’t have major issues so keep it up girl!

Here are some of My favorite scenes

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Hello I would like to do read 4 read with you, or with anyone that is reading it, my r4r are always open. I just add your story to fav ill send you screenshots asap
I have two stories that you can chose from
1.
Name: King’s Desire
Description: You have to be careful, here magical creatures kill humans, their superior has a crush on you, will you risk it?
Style: Classic
Episodes: 20 completed
genre: Fantasy
link http://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/6717842728157184
2.
Name: Thriller: The Truth About Your Nightmares
Description: Your forgotten past comes to your dreams, now it’s your time to take the situation on your hands. cc choices matter different endings
episodes: 3 completed
Gerne: Thriller
Style: Limelight
Link: http://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5246209537998848

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Moving this to Promote Your Story since it’s more about R4Rs than feedback. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink:

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Hi they @MissMayI do you want R4R with me…?

@Kaskaydee Do you want to do R4R with me?

Hello we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 19 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong, independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her fate? CC

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

Title- Tainted Souls.
Genre- Fantasy
Style- INK
Description- Despised by everybody around her, Ella just doesn’t feel good enough. Be careful what you wish for…You never know who could be listening… CC
Episodes- 5 (On Going)
Story Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5020832933740544

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Alright I am down. I just woke up. It would be nice if you able to notify me once you have started reading.

Hi! I’d love to do R4R with you!

itle: The #MeMeMe Generation
Author: Lissia A.
Genre: Action/Drama
Style: Ink
Description: When heartbroken Arlene finds out about being fatally ill meanwhile her criminal lover sabotages her, she decides to take her life under control by breaking the law.

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5457799657684992
Instagram: @lissia.author
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Hey i read your story, here is the screenshots

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Hey everyone!! Thanks for the reads! I have not forgotten to read yours in return, I’ve just had a very busy weekend, and I’ll start reading them tonight! :slight_smile: Thank you so much!!

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