Looking for some feedback on my story


#1

Hello, I’ve been writing this story for some time now and was hoping for some feedback. I’ve never done this before and wanted some tips on how I can improve it and if it is any good. The story is called ‘Shh, It’s a Secret’
Description: This story is about mysteries. It starts off with a young girl going missing and the last people to see her alive are her three best friends. After five years a clue pops up. Can the detectives figure out what happened to her through all the secrets.
Comments: If you could tell me what you think of the story and characters that would be great. I would like to hear what you like and don’t like about it.
Thank you very much!


#2

I can review your story! Could I also ask for you to review mine?


#3

Yes of course what is your story?


#4

BROOKLYN by Christina Dawn. Thanks! I’ll send fanmail with my feedback!


#5

If you want a review, you could check out my thread here. :slight_smile:


#6

Hi Jess,
Would you be interested in doing a review for review?


#7

Yes of course. What is your story?


#8

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#9