Looking for some feedback on my story

Hello, I’ve been writing this story for some time now and was hoping for some feedback. I’ve never done this before and wanted some tips on how I can improve it and if it is any good. The story is called ‘Shh, It’s a Secret’
Description: This story is about mysteries. It starts off with a young girl going missing and the last people to see her alive are her three best friends. After five years a clue pops up. Can the detectives figure out what happened to her through all the secrets.
Comments: If you could tell me what you think of the story and characters that would be great. I would like to hear what you like and don’t like about it.
Thank you very much!

I can review your story! Could I also ask for you to review mine?

Yes of course what is your story?

BROOKLYN by Christina Dawn. Thanks! I’ll send fanmail with my feedback!

If you want a review, you could check out my thread here. :slight_smile:

Hi Jess,
Would you be interested in doing a review for review?

Yes of course. What is your story?

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: