I’m looking for someone to give me feedback on the first five chapters of my story.
It’s Called Delirium, and I just released it on the app!
A quick synopsis to give you an idea of what you’re getting yourself into:
Blair has recently gone off to college, where she gets involved in a supernatural war. She’s torn between good and evil, and has to make a decision on where her heart truly lies. As she gets deeper into the supernatural rabbit hole, Blair finds she’s the key to ending the war. Which side will she choose?
The link for the story is here, and any and all feedback is welcome.
If you’d rather search on the app my author name is C.S. Faith.
Thank you so much!