Looking for someone to read my story and give me feed back

Hi, I’m new and this is my first story. I have just posted my first three episodes. Please if your could give it a read, and tell me what you think.

Story Link:

Story Title: Into the Light


wanna r4r with me?

Yeah, I’m down. What is your story? :blush:

This is what I have read so far planning to read more soon.

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ty :smiley:

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