I’m almost finished with my Magicka Contest entry, but of course as I’m closer to publication, the more unsure I am of the story ;-;
I’d really like someone to read the first two chapters and basically tell me if it flows, if it makes sense, if characters are likeable, etc etc etc.
Sound and music is probably a bit wonky or completely absent - I haven’t finished tweaking all the sound effects and music yet
I’ll absolutely review a story for you in return, or help you make a cover or edit a background or overlay or whatever you’d need.
I just need some peace of mind here :’’)))