Looking for someone to review your story? (CLOSED)


#1

Hey guys! will as the title says, put your stories details and i’ll read and give you an honest feedback, I’ll only review 3 first chapters.

and you can tell me where you want me to send you the feedback :slight_smile:

I’d love if you guys followed me on my instagram @elaf.episode


#2

Moved to Share Feedback section as that’s where review threads live! :v:t2:


#3

Hey @elaf, I would love for you to review my story.

Title: Cupid’s Arrow: You Cannot Buy My Love
Author: GirlLykAnn
Episodes: 3 {4 is not a out yet}

(I am aware there are a few errors in my story, I can’t update my chapters tho, as I am waiting for some backgrounds to be approved)


#4

Hey. Thanks for this! :heart:

TITLE: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
AUTHOR: Winter05 with Episode Royalty
LINK:


INSTAGRAM: @winter05.episode

Please PM the feedback to me here. :slight_smile:

I hope you enjoy my story. :blush:

~ Winter :snowflake:


#5

Where do you want your review?


#6

Thanks for offering to do this! I’d love some feedback on an older story as I’m thinking of re-vamping it! :slight_smile: You can PM me the review

Title: Childhood Sweethearts
Author: crazycordy
Episodes: 3 (more to come)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6403006106697728


#7

Pm :wink:


#8

Hey @elaf :blush:
I was looking for someone whi will give me honest feedbacks about my story and here you are!
Plus, I only have three episodes and just be warned that it’s my first story and that I’m not English . So I know it’ll not be perfect.
Title:Dark Side
Author:Merit
Teaser: When Tori’s parents get killed, she soon discover the true face of government. Follow her between fear and love…
It takes place in a future dystopian world :blush:

Thank you so much :heart:


#10

I couldn’t find your story, could you give me the link please?


#11

Hi, @elaf!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

Your IG — followed :blush:

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#12

A Review would be amazing!

Title: The Next Stage
Author: Lisa.p
Genre: Comedy
Description: Stephen & Molly, Stephen a lovable fool and Molly an inspiring artist. Follow them on to the next chapter of their lives.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833794190180352
Instagram: @lisa.p.episode


#13

Hey @elaf !

If you have a chance…

I would love a review on my newly published story “The Hole

Here is my linktree, which has my link…

https://linktr.ee/episode.shanferg

And I will give your instagram a follow! Keep an eye out for @episode.shanferg!


#14

Hello! :wave:
This is meh story:
Title: Shape Shifting Madness
Author: Dasha
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6006937021972480
PM me when you reviewed it. :kissing_smiling_eyes:

  • Dasha

#15

Where do you want your review?


#16

PM please :blush::sparkling_heart:


#17

Where would you want your review?


#18

hi @elaf

Would you mind sending me a review via pm on my story:

Title Lost Boy Lost Girl
Author: MrBitPlayer
Genre: Drama
Description A lonely girl next door and troubled boy come closer together as challenges bring out the worse and best in them. [CC] [+perspectives+]
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6253275339161600


#19

If you wanted to put it on Instagram, that would be awesome!!!

I followed yu the other night, my name is @episode.shanferg (: :two_hearts:


#20

My friend and I published a story. We would love some feedback!
Story - Beneath The Surface
Authors - Liv B and Aimee
Genre - Action
Chapters out - 2
Description - Being a FBI agent was always your passion, but there is a dark side to every dream. Secrets appear and it’s up to you to find the truth. Can you discover it and finally move on?


#21

If you’re still doing them, I’d love one!
Title: In the County
Author: Mimi B.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5184933012570112