Hey @elaf
I was looking for someone whi will give me honest feedbacks about my story and here you are!
Plus, I only have three episodes and just be warned that it’s my first story and that I’m not English . So I know it’ll not be perfect.
Title:Dark Side
Author:Merit
Teaser: When Tori’s parents get killed, she soon discover the true face of government. Follow her between fear and love…
It takes place in a future dystopian world
Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!
Your IG — followed
If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked
My story details:
Name of story: H & V: Fate Author: Alex Af Genre: Thriller Episodes: 4 (completed) Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter. Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728 Instagram: @episode.alex.af
Title: The Next Stage
Author: Lisa.p
Genre: Comedy
Description: Stephen & Molly, Stephen a lovable fool and Molly an inspiring artist. Follow them on to the next chapter of their lives.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833794190180352
Instagram: @lisa.p.episode
My friend and I published a story. We would love some feedback!
Story - Beneath The Surface
Authors - Liv B and Aimee
Genre - Action
Chapters out - 2
Description - Being a FBI agent was always your passion, but there is a dark side to every dream. Secrets appear and it’s up to you to find the truth. Can you discover it and finally move on?