Looking for someone to review your story? (CLOSED)

Hey guys! will as the title says, put your stories details and i’ll read and give you an honest feedback, I’ll only review 3 first chapters.

and you can tell me where you want me to send you the feedback :slight_smile:

I’d love if you guys followed me on my instagram @elaf.episode


Moved to Share Feedback section as that’s where review threads live! :v:t2:

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Hey @elaf, I would love for you to review my story.

Title: Cupid’s Arrow: You Cannot Buy My Love
Author: GirlLykAnn
Episodes: 3 {4 is not a out yet}

(I am aware there are a few errors in my story, I can’t update my chapters tho, as I am waiting for some backgrounds to be approved)

Hey. Thanks for this! :heart:

TITLE: Soccer Moms: Blast to the Future
AUTHOR: Winter05 with Episode Royalty

INSTAGRAM: @winter05.episode

Please PM the feedback to me here. :slight_smile:

I hope you enjoy my story. :blush:

~ Winter :snowflake:

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Where do you want your review?

Thanks for offering to do this! I’d love some feedback on an older story as I’m thinking of re-vamping it! :slight_smile: You can PM me the review

Title: Childhood Sweethearts
Author: crazycordy
Episodes: 3 (more to come)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6403006106697728

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Pm :wink:

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Hey @elaf :blush:
I was looking for someone whi will give me honest feedbacks about my story and here you are!
Plus, I only have three episodes and just be warned that it’s my first story and that I’m not English . So I know it’ll not be perfect.
Title:Dark Side
Teaser: When Tori’s parents get killed, she soon discover the true face of government. Follow her between fear and love…
It takes place in a future dystopian world :blush:

Thank you so much :heart:

I couldn’t find your story, could you give me the link please?

Hi, @elaf!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

Your IG — followed :blush:

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af

A Review would be amazing!

Title: The Next Stage
Author: Lisa.p
Genre: Comedy
Description: Stephen & Molly, Stephen a lovable fool and Molly an inspiring artist. Follow them on to the next chapter of their lives.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5833794190180352
Instagram: @lisa.p.episode

Hey @elaf !

If you have a chance…

I would love a review on my newly published story “The Hole

Here is my linktree, which has my link…


And I will give your instagram a follow! Keep an eye out for @episode.shanferg!

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Hello! :wave:
This is meh story:
Title: Shape Shifting Madness
Author: Dasha
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6006937021972480
PM me when you reviewed it. :kissing_smiling_eyes:

  • Dasha
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Where do you want your review?

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PM please :blush::sparkling_heart:

Where would you want your review?

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hi @elaf

Would you mind sending me a review via pm on my story:

Title Lost Boy Lost Girl
Author: MrBitPlayer
Genre: Drama
Description A lonely girl next door and troubled boy come closer together as challenges bring out the worse and best in them. [CC] [+perspectives+]
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6253275339161600

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If you wanted to put it on Instagram, that would be awesome!!!

I followed yu the other night, my name is @episode.shanferg (: :two_hearts:

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My friend and I published a story. We would love some feedback!
Story - Beneath The Surface
Authors - Liv B and Aimee
Genre - Action
Chapters out - 2
Description - Being a FBI agent was always your passion, but there is a dark side to every dream. Secrets appear and it’s up to you to find the truth. Can you discover it and finally move on?

If you’re still doing them, I’d love one!
Title: In the County
Author: Mimi B.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5184933012570112