Looking for someone to test my story


I’m looking for someone to test my story (give me feedback and tell me if it’s intriguing and if there are any glitches)

Only finished one episode yet but wanted feedback before I go and finish the rest.

Also, not sure how to send it to someone?



I would love to help!

If you want to share it you can do it like this:


Then copy it and then you paste it here!


Thank you for the help!

That is the link to my first episode. Thank you!

(I feel the need to clarify though that at the end of the episode it may seem like a gang/mob story but it really isn’t. There is a lot going on behind the scenes.)