Looking for stories to proofread/rate!

i can…
-and send feedback


You can do it for mine! Do you have an instagram?

yes i do

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Mines is Makayla.reed.episode

You can just dm me that it’s you

I’m always looking for someone willing to give their feedback and opinions! And if I made even a slight grammar mistake, I want someone to tell me as well!

Instagram: @epi.sam.writes

Title: The Art of Criminal Profiling

Genre: Mystery

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 5 and more coming soon

Can Valentina, a successful FBI agent, decode a series of bone chilling mysteries before it’s too late? If not, she may just lose everything and everyone she cares about.

Full customization other than not being able to change the MC’s skin color. Both LIs are fully customizable.

There are numerous point systems with choices that matter.

Mini games and sound are incorporated into the story.

Hope you check it out :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:


The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Art of Criminal Profiling

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Hey I’d love to see what you think of my new story!
title Loose Lips Sink Ships
author @Darcie.Episode
genre Mystery
description working for a private investigator, you know how people love their secrets. But a girl is missing in your beach town, and when people start talking, those secrets are gonna sink ships.

Here’s mine!
I’m always open for some new and different opinions! Be realistic! :heart:

Name: Arena Of Pride
Genre/s: Drama filled with action & romance
Author: Jelly
IG: @jelly.epi
Episodes: 16 (more coming soon)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6418652016607232

After a tragedy, Layla gets dragged deep down in the mafia world. Little did she know that the leader of Morocco’s black market - Oscar Kebryak, would put her under his protection.

Moved to Share Feedback since this is about proofreading and feedback. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :smiley:

It would mean a lot if you could proofread my story!! (For layer errors, grammar errors, etc.)

Title: Forever and Always (CC)

Genre: Romance/Action/Thriller/Drama/Fantasy

Style: LL

Chapters: 4 (More coming soon)


Ok but why does the girl in the drawing look like Nadia from Elite???

Haha I didn’t know who that was so I had to look her up!! I don’t really see the resemblance. I see more of Diane Guerrero from Orange is the New Black :two_hearts:

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I would be happy to receive your feedback for my story! It would really mean a lot. I’m open to any kinds of critic, you can be brutal if you want! :see_no_evil::heart_decoration:

Title: Treasure In You
Author: L.Q. Walter
Instagram: @lqwalter.episode
Genre: Adventure/Romance
Chapters: 6 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
Description: After discovering an old diary she believes will lead her to the location of a long lost treasure, she teams with an unlikely ally: a guy who is downright cocky yet wickedly hot!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5342141547216896

Thank you for helping, dear. Here’s my story. Feel free to rate, give feedback and proofread.

Hey! Thank you so much for doing this!

My story: Tempting

Genre: Romance

Description: Being a rich one-hit-wonder having a bad breakup can lead you to some bad circumstances and Chicago’s most eligible bachelor. What happens when the two of you collide? LL/CC/CM

Insta: @tiff_episode

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5664934106169344

i love the plot of ur story! the mini games are really fun too! also like how u incorporated spanish. cool starting menu too!

ive never read a story where the mc lives near a beach, i really like that! also i love the backgrounds u use.

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