Looking for the review of my story

Would you be able to review my story?

I have only posted 3 chapters
Author: RAW
Episodes: 3 (More episodes coming soon)
Genre: fantasy/adventure
Style: Limelight
Description: This is a story about two legendary gods Astron and Alice who born to fight with evil forces in the world, Alice is still unaware of her original identity and living like a normal human, but her special powers makes her life difficult and she also unaware of the threats around her, Her aunt who is also a goddess is protecting her until she gets her full powers.
LINK http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4848158938365952

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