Looking for tips for a nice intro!

Try to start the story off with a “bang” which introduces your main character and tells you a little bit about him/her

For example, if your MC likes to sleep and is kind of on the lazy side, you can start the story a little like this:
(MC is sleeping)
(someone yells)
NARRATOR
See that girl who’s being yelled at right now?
@MC is (an embarassed animation)
NARRATOR
That’s me.

It’s good to show, not tell, what your characters’ personalities are.

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