Loose Lips Sink Ships - - story is complete!

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My New episode story
Theme is romance and drama
Would be entertaining to all age groups
I am myself 1 years old and I love this
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Hey everyone! Episode 7 of my story, Loose Lips Sink Ships is out now! Also, check out the amazing review @Zondiewriter did of my first few episodes! Thanks again :wink:
Link to review:


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Review Summary:


"I love the droplet of water overlay at the start of the story! The music and the sounds are perfectly coordinated. In the start of the episode, I loved the narration, giving us a bit of background as well as the directing where one of the characters fades away! That really sets the scene and goes well with the narration. There is one little mistake, it’s in scene one where you say ‘never to surface.’ Consider changing it to resurface.

The dramatic scene change and the music were perfectly coordinated! You had built the perfect amount of suspense and led me wanting to know more about the first scene. Grabbing the attention of a reader from just the first few scenes is important; a lot of people decide whether they want to continue with the story within the first few lines.

There are a few grammatical errors throughout episode one. If you’d like me to, I can go back and screenshot them and send them to you privately. I like the fact you put a customisation scene, however, the way she pops up in the screen and pops back into the car is abrupt. I’d suggest letting readers customise the MC when she is out of the car and you can zoom into her in a less harsh way.
I have to say, I love the car overlay reverse! It looks so real – just like you’d do with a real car. It’s a simple little action but it’s very appealing. Since this is an interactive and visual app, little things like that are greatly appreciated even if readers don’t realise it. I must say I love the narration, the description of the town, however, try adding a scene where you show it alongside narrating. I would suggest adding a scene where you see a bunch of affluent people even just talking to each other. I have read a lot of comments where people love to see and not only read. This is just a suggestion! You don’t have to do it.

There is a scene where the MC is just standing outside whilst narration is going on. Again, I would suggest doing an action even if it’s her just checking her phone. When you are directing, try imagining yourself in that scene, what would you do?

The overall flow of the story is amazing! It is well paced, well timed and the overall directing is good. I love the background story behind the important feature of the MC character! I find that to be very original, and it makes me wonder why she feels the way she does about them. Apart from the very few grammatical errors and the directing, everything else is beautifully written. The mini background stories about the characters are really refreshing. Getting to know the people around the MC is important! It allows the reader to really feel what it is like to be in the MC’s shoes.

I love the sweet relationship between the mother and daughter as well as between the mother’s love interest. A lot of stories tend to portray the partners in a bad way, even though this is true in terms of reality, there are also lot’s of people who adore their parents’ partners and have a good relation. All I am trying to say is, you don’t add unnecessary drama which holds no importance to the overall story, so well done. The chapter lengths are long. I feel like it is very much worth your ticket. The story is engaging, it draws you in and it is written well! I really enjoyed reading the book. It got me hooked from the start all the way to the end."

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Author Name: Jasmine Kay
Story Name: Beneath The Surface
Summary: Your the Darkness and he’s the Devil. You end up working for him, will you fall in love or will you finish the job and go your way? Read to find out
Instagram Handle: @epi_jasmine_sode

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6000019191300096

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Thank you for trusting me to review :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::two_hearts:

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Thank you for this thread hon!
Here’s mine:
Title: The Card
Author: Ali
IG: @alisepisode
Genre: Drama
Style: LL
Episodes: 5, working on 6
Description: One experience changed your whole outlook on love. But when you have your best friend & mysterious stranger fighting for your heart, will the meaning of love change for you? (CC, Choices will matter)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4645196883755008
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Title: Mean Business
Genre: Drama
Updates: (Double Updates Weekly)
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4975074176860160

Hey! Are you open to doing read 4 read? Would love to check yours out!
Here is my story
Title: Something About Booker

Genre: Romance

Description: Senior year. Road trips, bad decisions and goodbyes. After months away Jordyn’s best friend, Booker has returned. Together they embark on a road trip that would last a lifetime.

Author: Kma_writes (me)

Episodes: 3 currently

Link: https://episodeinteractive.com/s/4637391132950528

Thank you! :sparkling_heart:

If you want you can follow me on Instagram @kma_episode

Thank you for this thread
This is my story <3
Title: Turning the Tables
Author: epihxe
IG: @epihxe
Genre: Action
Style: LL
Episodes(ongoing): 4
Updates: once a week or more
Description: There are a lot of problems when you’re an independant woman who runs a mafia. What happens when the line between love and hate becomes blurred?! Art scenes, CC, LL
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5746280849145856

Hi! I just published my new story. Feel free to check it out! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::purple_heart:

:heartpulse:Title: Times Square: The Story Of Us
:heartpulse:Description: “Enlisting in the army for your lover was the biggest challenge you thought you’d ever face… But nothing prepared you for motherhood with two daddy’s boys.”
:heartpulse:Genre: RomCom (But can be seen on comedy section)
:heartpulse:Style & other features: Limelight | Full CC | Point system :sparkling_heart::pill: | Choices matter | Possibly three endings :eyes:
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6128023490985984

Author’s Instagram: @janinestories

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Title Crazy for you
Author Jojo
Genre Romance + Lesbian option
Instagram @joxilove.write
Episode 11 (ongoing)
Description Freya doesn’t believe true love exists.What happens when she finds herself involved in a steamy love affair with the sexiest race car driver in New York? Can she resist him?
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5430740375896064

If anyone could take the time to read mine I would hugely appreciate it!

Story: The Unwanted
Genre: Mystery
Insta: @evilyn.writes
Style: Ink

15 years since we’ve been deemed useless and deported to Earth. Now, we reunite to solve the supernatural murders and as past becomes present, our mistakes become fatal…

Advanced directing/ overlays etc.

Link: https://episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5431076573085696

Also up for r4r!

Thanks :hugs:

Thank you for the thread :white_heart:
TITLE: Our little secret

GENRE: Mystery/Drama

DESCRIPTION: What could be better than meeting five close friends at a student party? Such events are extremely rare. However, things don’t get so rosy when a dead girl is found in the house. Who is behind this and what is the little secret of each of them?

•Full CC

•One LI

•Sounds & Music

•Point System, Choices matter, Mini games

My ig: @epi.ksu

Hi, Darcie.Episode :white_heart:
I’ll also do READ FOR READ Hope you can read it, it really means a lot to me :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Here’s mine :hugs:

:notebook: THIS IS MY STORY :notebook:
Author: Ava. S
Title: Love, Hate
Story Genre: Comedy And Romance
Chapters: 8 (more chapters coming soon)
Story Style: Limelight
Gem Choice: No
As a famous boy band leader, Liam. Because of an “accident.” , he switches bodies with a GIRL?!?!?! Is this an arrangement of fate? Will they fall in love with each other?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6264000574324736

Instagram: @ava_the_epiwriter

(If my English Grammar or Spelling got wrong please tell me🥺)



Here are my stories for me to promote.

Author name: Alice. C 1.5
Instagram: @alicec.episode

Title: Their Epitome of Emotionless
Genre: Drama
Chapters: 20 (Fully Released)
Style: Limelight
CC: Limited
Plot: They’re both emotionless and numb for different reasons. What happens when they cross paths with one another in the most unexpected way they could ever imagine?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5623492961828864
Small Cover:

Title: The Heir and His Female Bodyguard
Genre: Drama
Chapters: 26 (fully released)
Style: Limelight
CC: None
Plot: Ryder Sinclair and his female bodyguard, Winona have been friends since childhood. What happens when the demons from her past have come back to haunt her? Completed
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5374990983692288
Small Cover:

Title: Apart of Her World
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 12 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
CC: Full CC for a YOU character in episode 8,11 & 12
Plot: Luna Spencer is a shy, introverted art student who has never experienced love before. What happens when she meets the handsome lead singer from her favourite band, Atomic Grunge?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5514021369872384
Small Cover:

Title: Sweet Love Story: From Friends to Lovers
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 5 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
CC: None
Plot: Issac Rogers is not a normal guy because he’s a very famous supermodel. What happens when he meets Angeline Copeland, a beautiful artist whom he falls in love with? Male MC
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5885039249260544
Small Cover:

Title: His White Deer
Genre: Fantasy
Chapters: 8 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
CC: None
Plot: Atlas Redwood is a lonely red deer, looking for his mate since he was 17. Find out when he rescues a very rare white deer from near death who happens to be his long-awaited mate?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6311195501723648
Small Cover:

Title: A Little Death LL
Genre: Drama
Chapters: 7 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
CC: None
Plot: Red Kingston is a handsome, wealthy man with his own personal demons. Find out what happens when he meets his equal in the form of a beautiful woman named Iris.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6491249977917440
Small Cover:

Title: In My Eyes
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 5 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
CC: Limited
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6388216803557376
Plot: I thought I had everything to keep me satisfied but I feel alone. I have the urge to fill in the void by laying my eyes onto a certain hazel-eyed girl on that fateful autumn day.
Small Cover:
Title: FT: The Skeleton King and His Bride
Genre: Fantasy
Chapters: 5 (Fully released)
Style: Limelight
CC: Limited
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4733878101803008
Plot: Viola is kidnapped to be sacrificed for the Bennett family who has been cursed for centuries in order to appease the immortal skeleton king who wants a bride for all of eternity.
Small Cover:

Title: Bedevilled Sins
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 9 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
CC: None
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5063197879631872
Plot: Anton Stewart is a devilishly handsome sinner who is fuelled by money, sadness and loneliness. What happens when he reunites with his first love and ex, Ginevra Lewis?
Small Cover:

Thank you for the thread, here are mine:

The Unwanted Mafia details

The Unwanted Mafia Link


Finding Peace Along The Way details

Finding Peace Along The Way Link


Falling for mr height (arriving in 1 day)


Let me know if you’re interested in a r4r. :heart:

Title: Eat Stake
Author: Sinead O’Neill
IG: sineadoneill.lovestowrite

Story Description
Your destiny is to protect humanity from a malevolent being, who intends to populate the world with such evil. What happens though, when you fall for his hot but heartless son?
(cc, choices, adv directing, music/sound, mini-games)

Eat Stake link

Congrats on publishing! I love a good mystery! :star_struck:

If anyone is interested in a R4R, please send me a quick message! Also feel free to promote your stories down below. :vampire: :heart:


Title: Crescent Hill :star_and_crescent:

Author: Ksenia

Genre: In Horror Shelf (also could be considered Fantasy/Romance/Drama)

Description: “His name might be Angel but he’s far from it. What happens when you find yourself falling for the sociopathic vampire next door?”

Number of Ep. : 1-3 are out now! More to come!

Style: Limelight

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6709952953122816

Includes: Customization, 1 Love Interest, Mini Games, Some Choices Matter, Advanced Zooms and Directing

In the future, I plan on adding an LGBT version to the app! If you would be interested in an LGBT version, please let me know and I will expedite the process! :smile_cat:

Congrats! I’ve just published today! I’ve read your story already and it’s amazing!

Hope you’ll give my story a try!


When shipwreck leaves you lost at sea with a band of pirates will you use the stars to navigate? With a nutty king on your tail and treasure on the map this sea is full of secrets.