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#1

Hello! I’m looking for some stories to give my honest opinion and constructive criticism and feedback.

Grading Scale :

Overall Grade (1 to 10)
Length ( 1 to 10)
Cover (1 to 10)
Originality (1 to 10)
Animations (1 to 10)
Dialogue & Word Choice (1 to 10)
Music & Sound Effects (1 to 10)
Choices (how many there are and how big of an impact they leave) (1 to 10)

10 & 9 - No suggestions needed! The story is absolutely perfect!
8 & 7 & 6 - Needs a few suggestions/improvements ; good
5 - Needs some suggestions/improvement - mediocre
4 & 3 - A lot of improvement needed: Almost bad
1 - Needs a lottt of help urgently: BAD
0- Needs to work in the area and will be suggested to ask someone who ranks high marks in the particular category for help

You need to fill out this forum before I review your story :
Author Name:
Story Title:
Genre:
Description:
Published(yes or no):
Instagram(optional if you want the review posted here and/or on instagram)
Cover Art:
How many episodes are published:
Any Specific Suggestions You Need Help On:

Will only review one episode unless stated otherwise, maximum is three.
Will take 4-6 business days as for I have my own life matters to attend to such as school and etc,
Thank you! :slight_smile:


#2

I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of refugees who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
I published this a few days ago, so it only has 3 episodes.
Cover:

HERE’S THE LINK!
I’m a little nervous, but I hope you like it!


#3

Hello! I think this would probably get more traffic if you put it in the Creator’s Corner section! :blush:


#4

Author Name: Mary-P
Story Title: Music in our hearts
Genre: Fantasy
Description:
You’re a straight A student with a passion for art but don’t have any talent. When a mysterious voice leads you to 3 Muses of the Mythology, magic offers you a new perspective.
Published(yes or no): Yes
Instagram : maryp.episodefr
How many episodes are published: 3

Is it entertaining even if there’s no romance ?


#5

Thank you for doing this.:purple_heart:
Author: PrettyEri
Title: Kotton Kandie
Genre: comedy
Kandie’s finally free from an abusive marriage. Now it’s time for her to start anew - with a stalkerish ex-husband on her tail. Her navigate through life. Choices matter.
Published: yes
Instagram: @eri2.0
Published episodes: 6
Any Specific Suggestions You Need Help On: Not that I know of. Can you review 3 episodes?
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#6

Moved to Share Feedback since it’s for reviews. If you have questions about anything, feel free to PM me and make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics. :wink:


#7

Author Name: Nelles
Story Title: Through his eyes
Genre: Romantic/ Drama
Description: As a young writer you find inspiration in an unexpected place. When your book becomes a movie, you’re forced to choose: lie to the man of your dreams or risk losing everything. CC INK
Published(yes or no): No
Cover Art: 22
How many episodes are published: 4 ones completed so far
Any Specific Suggestions You Need Help On: Nothing specific. I hope you can review 3 episodes for me, thank you in advance :slight_smile::


#8

Even if there is no romance involved it could potentially be very entertaining ! :slight_smile:


#9

The cover already looks great! I’ll be sure to start reviewing the story shortly!


#10

You’re welcome! I’ll start reveiwing soon! :slight_smile:


#11

Thank you! Be honest, please!


#12

You’re welcome! It’ll take some more time since its not just 1 chapter but I’ll surely be able to do that for you! :slight_smile:


#13

Current Queue :

  1. @turtle_cat
  2. @mary-p
  3. @PrettyEri
  4. @Nelles

#14

Yes, I could definitely do 3 chapters, however, it’ll take a bit more time since it’s more than 1. :slight_smile:


#15

I don’t mind waiting. Thank you so much.


#16

No problem :smiley:


#17

Can you do 2 chapters from me ? :grinning:


#18

Sure, but it’ll take more time, :slight_smile:


#19

Hi @lyn_and_michelle! I would like my story to be reviewed too. I hope you’ll like it! :blush::blue_heart:

Author Name: Lou
Story Title: Puppy Love
Genre: Romance/Fantasy
Description: Jason caught himself in a CRAZY, complicated situation. Watch out on how he will handle his true feelings for Alli. Will he be able to admit he’s falling for her after finding out she’s his puppy??
Published(yes or no): YES
Instagram: @authorlou.episode
How many episodes are published: 7 ongoing


#20

Hi @Turtle_Cat! I have finished your review!

Length : 6/10
Cover : 6.5/10
Originality: 7/10
Animations : 9/10
Dialouge & Word Choice : 6/10
Music & Sound Effects : 5/10 (not enough)
Choices : 8/10

Feedback : The story’s good and original, there’s a lot of animations and impactful choices. However, you should add more music and/or sound effects for a more dramatic effect. :):grinning: