Mafia story help please!

Hey y’all…I’m making a new mafia story but I don’t have any inspiration for the first episode…help me create it???

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Maybe read other mafia stories by other authors for inspiration but don’t read the ones with toxic LI or ones that romanticize toxic relationships.

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Okay what is the plot about do you have any idea

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Most of what I see is toxic…so I don’t really have any idea but for the next few episodes yea

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Ummm basically an Indian girl is forced to marry someone…she escapes and meets a dude who will be the ll

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Did you do any research on Indian people? Just wondering

I like that. Its great so, the guy is a gang leader

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I’m an Indian lol :joy:

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Oki!!!

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I kinda wanna plan the escape…idk what to do for it

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Oh sorry about that.

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Well what’s this guy or girl who the mc is forced to marry like?

That’s completely alright!! My pfp looks different ik :joy:

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The person is old…Really old…lol

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Ok,

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Maybe this will help,

It was a normal day, she just got back from work, hoping to have a good dinner with her parents (and siblings if she has them). She comes into the house, sees a couple of strange man (bodyguards or whatever) and then she sees the MC standing/or sitting with her parents. She was always afraid of this moment, but never knew this would really happen - as her parents marriage was also forced but it did work out. (this is optional, idk.)

i would do this, but expand it ofc over a whole chapter. and then a cliffhanger for chapter 2 saying “Meet your future husband” or whatever

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Omg!!! This is amazing ty!!!

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Np!

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