Mafia story help please!

Maybe this will help,

It was a normal day, she just got back from work, hoping to have a good dinner with her parents (and siblings if she has them). She comes into the house, sees a couple of strange man (bodyguards or whatever) and then she sees the MC standing/or sitting with her parents. She was always afraid of this moment, but never knew this would really happen - as her parents marriage was also forced but it did work out. (this is optional, idk.)

i would do this, but expand it ofc over a whole chapter. and then a cliffhanger for chapter 2 saying “Meet your future husband” or whatever

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