For everyone who has read it what do you think.
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it is also called
lawless love
Doberman
Hearts Wild
Queen Of Hearts
hot streak
luck and love
Did i miss any?
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I am not kidding about all the names
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I know I saw. I was like OMG
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I agree
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anyway i find it okay. and it did not make me fell bad about not using gems. a lot of them guilt trip you.
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it’s a lot worse than the original one by Meeza called The Doberman (which is amazing btw)
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Honestly, I wouldn’t think TWICE about replaying the original version of The Doberman, don’t even care if it’s INK or LL. This story is gold. But whenever an amazing story gets featured, I feel like it ends up losing more than gaining. But it’s just me. 
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Same
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Honestly though? The original Back and Forth is SO much better than the new one.
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Is it that good? Let me go to it
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Ummmmmm so I came on here to see if anyone had any complaints… I just read the three episodes of this story yesterday… the directing is HORRIBLE!! Ummmm is it just mine or are characters flying across rooms at hyper speed sans walking animation…just in a standing pose flying from one end to another in 0.5 seconds. OH!!..and 75% of the talking is apparently happening telepathically. Everyone is just reading each other’s minds apparently because there are no talking animations being used. They’re just all standing still, starring and talking lips shut. And don’t get me started on the fact that this a story that I expected to have cheaper gem choices as it’s not an official episode original story written by episode staff… FORTY GEMS FOR ALL CHOICES WHEN THAT’S HOW POORLY IT’S DIRECTED!!! That’s a slap in the face…
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Lmfao I literally just got this story a few days ago. I’m currently reading the LL version of the original Doberman… sooooo not even going to touch this story at all. There were tons of new features, like animations or hairstyles, but I prefer the original.
I thought it was just me. I posted about this in the other thread (from when it was in beta as the Doberman), and it seemed like I was the only one with this problem. Jonah in particular talks with his mouth closed often, and for whatever reason he is the greatest offender when it comes to “walking” from spot to spot without actually moving his legs. He just glides around. 
I should maybe be annoyed, but it honestly cracks me up. I know he’s supposed to look cool, but it just looks like he’s riding a segway out of every conversation after saying some rude thing to the MC, and I can’t help laughing.
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Lol!! I hear ya there! Can’t help but laugh at the story I crack up when they have their telepathic conversations… and now I’ll be dying laughing thinking about them zipping away upset on a Segway 
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So I have been working on my own story for a while now, and also playing stories. I played this one to its most recent update. I love it. But I really love all the hair choices. I was excited because I thought there was another hairstyle update but I still can’t find them on mine. How did you get all those hairstyles and can you share the template? I will give you credit of course.
You can find templates by @Dara.Amarie in this thread, but not all of the hairstyles in Mafia’s Girl have been released by Episode to the community yet:
LOL Wtf with this revamp? It ended at Episode 8, perhaps even more bizarrely and unsatisfyingly than Prosecutie.
The app currently says “More episodes to come,” but I read through the end, and it definitely completes at 8.
In Episode 8, the MC’s brother apparently comes back from the dead and turns out to be a rival of Jonah’s. He shoots at Jonah, but Jonah shoots (and kills?) him first. MC has a choice between letting Jonah go and wounding him with her brother’s gun so the police take him away. Jonah confesses his love to her, which was weird because the only conversation they’ve ever had in my play-through was different forms of “You can’t go out of this house unescorted.” I shot Jonah because I hate him, and he got arrested. Then “6 months later” the MC is on what I presume is a college campus with friends, and she sees Jonah there. He winks, and the story ends, gives you a gem, and says “hope you enjoyed the story.”
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I’m not one to do these things but: Episode 
promote and adapt shorter stories! Because what’s the point of rushing one which needed a lot of context and development
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Seriously. It makes NO sense.
I will say, though, this is the first time I can remember my MC being willfully single at the end of a featured romance, and I did like that part. The romance seemed super rushed and forced (with the long story jammed into the short episode count), so I liked being able to just be say, “Pass, dude. Not interested in you.”
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