Ummmmmm so I came on here to see if anyone had any complaints… I just read the three episodes of this story yesterday… the directing is HORRIBLE!! Ummmm is it just mine or are characters flying across rooms at hyper speed sans walking animation…just in a standing pose flying from one end to another in 0.5 seconds. OH!!..and 75% of the talking is apparently happening telepathically. Everyone is just reading each other’s minds apparently because there are no talking animations being used. They’re just all standing still, starring and talking lips shut. And don’t get me started on the fact that this a story that I expected to have cheaper gem choices as it’s not an official episode original story written by episode staff… FORTY GEMS FOR ALL CHOICES WHEN THAT’S HOW POORLY IT’S DIRECTED!!! That’s a slap in the face…
Lmfao I literally just got this story a few days ago. I’m currently reading the LL version of the original Doberman… sooooo not even going to touch this story at all. There were tons of new features, like animations or hairstyles, but I prefer the original.
I thought it was just me. I posted about this in the other thread (from when it was in beta as the Doberman), and it seemed like I was the only one with this problem. Jonah in particular talks with his mouth closed often, and for whatever reason he is the greatest offender when it comes to “walking” from spot to spot without actually moving his legs. He just glides around. 
I should maybe be annoyed, but it honestly cracks me up. I know he’s supposed to look cool, but it just looks like he’s riding a segway out of every conversation after saying some rude thing to the MC, and I can’t help laughing.
Lol!! I hear ya there! Can’t help but laugh at the story I crack up when they have their telepathic conversations… and now I’ll be dying laughing thinking about them zipping away upset on a Segway 
So I have been working on my own story for a while now, and also playing stories. I played this one to its most recent update. I love it. But I really love all the hair choices. I was excited because I thought there was another hairstyle update but I still can’t find them on mine. How did you get all those hairstyles and can you share the template? I will give you credit of course.
You can find templates by @Dara.Amarie in this thread, but not all of the hairstyles in Mafia’s Girl have been released by Episode to the community yet:
LOL Wtf with this revamp? It ended at Episode 8, perhaps even more bizarrely and unsatisfyingly than Prosecutie.
The app currently says “More episodes to come,” but I read through the end, and it definitely completes at 8.
In Episode 8, the MC’s brother apparently comes back from the dead and turns out to be a rival of Jonah’s. He shoots at Jonah, but Jonah shoots (and kills?) him first. MC has a choice between letting Jonah go and wounding him with her brother’s gun so the police take him away. Jonah confesses his love to her, which was weird because the only conversation they’ve ever had in my play-through was different forms of “You can’t go out of this house unescorted.” I shot Jonah because I hate him, and he got arrested. Then “6 months later” the MC is on what I presume is a college campus with friends, and she sees Jonah there. He winks, and the story ends, gives you a gem, and says “hope you enjoyed the story.”
I’m not one to do these things but: Episode 
promote and adapt shorter stories! Because what’s the point of rushing one which needed a lot of context and development
Seriously. It makes NO sense.
I will say, though, this is the first time I can remember my MC being willfully single at the end of a featured romance, and I did like that part. The romance seemed super rushed and forced (with the long story jammed into the short episode count), so I liked being able to just be say, “Pass, dude. Not interested in you.”
Right. I mean MC first flys away with Doberman in chapter 3-4, got to be in a love triangle by 6, and the biggest conflict (I haven’t read through it all yet) was her discovery of who stole wine bottles and Doberman getting shot?
Also, I love how MC’s brother Theo is just named Brother in the speech bubble 
and I already forgotten Jonah’s name lol
Hahaha. Had her brother even been mentioned before that? I had no recollection of his existence.
Wait, I chose to let him go, and the exact same ending happened (but not with him getting arrested). I don’t get the options too, because in that situation what Jonah did was technically self-defence, when MC’s brother shot him first. How the heck was I supposed to feel something for the brother, when I don’t know much about him and what Jonah did was somewhat justified.
Totally fair. I didn’t care about the brother at all. I just really didn’t like Jonah. Sounds like a disappointing ending either way.
Trust me, me too. Especially since the story barely tried to give the other LI a chance, despite choosing to not decide between the two first 
Yeah, I’m not sure what the point of the second LI was at all.
Yeeeeeeaa… I. Am. So. Confused. I let him get away to see if it was different from your ending. Nope. He runs away, then it says ‘six months later’ then she’s taking with some friends, they leave, then Jonah is there, winks, then boom, 'you’ve reached the end of the story… like da fuck?!? Lol …and the brother… that was weird…
Good to know it doesn’t matter whether you shoot the love interest in the final episode!
It is one of the worst featured story endings I’ve seen. Not sure what the point of adapting it was if this is how they were going about it.
Have you guys checked out the new one though? Stuck together? It’s kind of the same issues. Telepathic convos…gliding like a damn ballerina…half naked freak… I don’t even read those anymore because it’s all the exact same ish…